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Our Gran's Soup

Our gran used to make us soup, A steaming golden broth. It stood out like a work of art, Against the pearl white table cloth. Full of carrot, peas and lentils And leek of emerald green, It was the most colourful soup That I had ever seen. Expectantly, there we sat Around the dining table. Eagerly waiting for our soup, As gran wielded the ladle. Into the giant soup pan, She dipped the mighty spoon. We sat there reverentially, It couldn't come too soon. Finally all our bowls were filled, And gran said "carry on" And to the sound of happy slurping, The soup was quickly gone.

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Date: 9/4/2017 1:03:00 PM
Wonderful, full of love, memories and yes, soup/
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/4/2017 1:31:00 PM
Thank you DM :)
Date: 7/29/2017 6:11:00 PM
Great nostalgic poem, Gary. My grandnmother put a teaspoon full of bacon grease in everything she cooked. Brings back a lot of memories.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Daniel :)
Date: 7/29/2017 4:31:00 PM
"Gran" must've been an incredible cook; brings back memories...thanks.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thank you M.L. she was a wonderful cook. :)
Date: 7/29/2017 2:05:00 PM
Hi Gary. This poem seems familiar. It is great. Comforting, nostalgic. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/29/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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