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Our First Pet

 He was just a little wiener;
our precious little pup 
and I was just a toddler,
when my breakfast, he did sup.

How he loved his burgers;
ham he loved, as much.
He could quickly murder 
bologna, cheese and such.

I toddled along behind him
his tail, I held in brace.
He didn't mind my toddler whims,
when we were face-to-face.

He was just a little wiener; 
a playful little friend.
He had the best demeanor 
and we loved him, to the end.


Entered in contest: Dachshunds
Sponsored by: Rob Carmack
1-15-15

Copyright © M. L. Kiser | Year Posted 2015

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Emile Pinet Date: 2/26/2015 9:06:00 AM This is very beautiful and so well penned about a dog who filled the roll of friend in his life. Congratulations on your win. Emile #7 Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 2/27/2015 2:08:00 PM Thanks so much, Emile.

Skat A Date: 2/1/2015 2:38:00 PM M.L. KISER, CONGRATS on your win ~ SK Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 2/2/2015 5:27:00 PM Many thanks, Skat.

Jan Allison Date: 1/29/2015 2:42:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats ML:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/29/2015 4:49:00 PM Glad to see that; many thanks.

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/28/2015 3:55:00 PM Ahh!! A touching winning work ..Congrats ..Sara Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/28/2015 5:38:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Poesy Relish Date: 1/27/2015 2:36:00 AM Beautiful pen... congrats on the win Kiser Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/28/2015 2:52:00 PM Thank you, Nadiya.

Eve Roper Date: 1/26/2015 3:28:00 PM Good write, M.L.,congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend eve Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/26/2015 5:41:00 PM Many thanks for visiting and commenting.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/16/2015 9:09:00 AM We had dachshund when I was a kid, his name was Sam. He was a willful little fellow. Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 12:04:00 PM They are adorable, aren't they? I imagine that Sam just wanted to put in his two cents, worth. Thanks for the visit.

Jan Allison Date: 1/15/2015 4:26:00 PM aww ML what a cute poem:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:24:00 AM Thanks for the comment and well-wishes, Jan.

Sandra Haight Date: 1/15/2015 4:10:00 PM Love your Dachshund poem, M.L. I could clearly picture him and you together with your imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:25:00 AM Thank you, Sandra...if you could picture him, then the poem did its job well.

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/15/2015 12:01:00 PM Reads like a winner to me. I like the rhythm and flow to this one. Sara Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:24:00 AM Many thanks, Sara.

Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/15/2015 11:59:00 AM Well written M.L. I have enjoyed what you had to say about your Dachshud. GL in the contest... Verlena Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:26:00 AM Thanks Verlena. Your comments are quite appreciated.

David Meade Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM awesome dear friend. made waffles this morning for my daughter and you would have thought I was cooking for him -- Logan my faithful companion . . . who loves peanut butter! 7 Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:27:00 AM I once had a Shepherd/Elkhound mix that loved peanut butter, too. I appreciate your kind comments and best to you and Logan.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/15/2015 7:57:00 AM This is adorable! Login to Reply M. L. Kiser Date: 1/16/2015 8:27:00 AM Thank you. He was a well-loved dog.