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Our First Pet

He was just a little wiener; our precious little pup and I was just a toddler, when my breakfast, he did sup. How he loved his burgers; ham he loved, as much. He could quickly murder bologna, cheese and such. I toddled along behind him his tail, I held in brace. He didn't mind my toddler whims, when we were face-to-face. He was just a little wiener; a playful little friend. He had the best demeanor and we loved him, to the end. Entered in contest: Dachshunds Sponsored by: Rob Carmack 1-15-15

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Emile Pinet

Date: 2/26/2015 9:06:00 AM

This is very beautiful and so well penned about a dog who filled the roll of friend in his life. Congratulations on your win. Emile #7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/27/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Emile.

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:38:00 PM

M.L. KISER, CONGRATS on your win ~ SK

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/2/2015 5:27:00 PM

Many thanks, Skat.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2015 2:42:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/29/2015 4:49:00 PM

Glad to see that; many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2015 3:55:00 PM

Ahh!! A touching winning work ..Congrats ..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/28/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/27/2015 2:36:00 AM

Beautiful pen... congrats on the win Kiser

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/28/2015 2:52:00 PM

Thank you, Nadiya.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/26/2015 3:28:00 PM

Good write, M.L.,congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend eve

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/26/2015 5:41:00 PM

Many thanks for visiting and commenting.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2015 9:09:00 AM

We had dachshund when I was a kid, his name was Sam. He was a willful little fellow.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 12:04:00 PM

They are adorable, aren't they? I imagine that Sam just wanted to put in his two cents, worth. Thanks for the visit.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2015 4:26:00 PM

aww ML what a cute poem:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thanks for the comment and well-wishes, Jan.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/15/2015 4:10:00 PM

Love your Dachshund poem, M.L. I could clearly picture him and you together with your imagery. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:25:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra...if you could picture him, then the poem did its job well.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2015 12:01:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me. I like the rhythm and flow to this one. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:24:00 AM

Many thanks, Sara.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/15/2015 11:59:00 AM

Well written M.L. I have enjoyed what you had to say about your Dachshud. GL in the contest... Verlena

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thanks Verlena. Your comments are quite appreciated.

David Meade

Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM

awesome dear friend. made waffles this morning for my daughter and you would have thought I was cooking for him -- Logan my faithful companion . . . who loves peanut butter! 7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:27:00 AM

I once had a Shepherd/Elkhound mix that loved peanut butter, too. I appreciate your kind comments and best to you and Logan.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/15/2015 7:57:00 AM

This is adorable!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thank you. He was a well-loved dog.