David Crandall Poet Rhyme

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12/3/2024 for Christmas Wordplay Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Our First Noel

KISS me under mistletoe.
MISS me not, I'll never go.
MIST you see upon my eye?
LIST the reasons I might cry.
LOST I would be, I might die.
LOSE you - no, I'm first to tell -  
LOVE you, this, our first Noel.

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Beata Agustin December 27, 2024 at 4:44 AM Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you. David Crandall December 27, 2024 at 8:06 AM Thanks so much Beata - Happy New Year!

Sara Kendrick December 24, 2024 at 3:31 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K David Crandall December 24, 2024 at 1:55 PM Thanks Sara!

Reason A. Poteet December 23, 2024 at 6:23 PM Lots of morphing going on here. A great entry Well deserved placement. Congrats. David Crandall December 24, 2024 at 1:55 PM Thanks Reason! Yep, things progressed pretty quickly in that poem.

Kim Rodrigues December 23, 2024 at 5:46 PM Back with Congrats, David! David Crandall December 24, 2024 at 1:54 PM Thanks, gotta watch out for that mistletoe.

Crystol Woods December 23, 2024 at 10:17 AM Perfection xo David Crandall December 23, 2024 at 1:35 PM Thanks Crystol!

Kim Rodrigues December 4, 2024 at 5:17 AM So cute! Love it! David Crandall December 4, 2024 at 9:19 AM Thank you Kim!