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12/3/2024 for Christmas Wordplay Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

KISS me under mistletoe. MISS me not, I'll never go. MIST you see upon my eye? LIST the reasons I might cry. LOST I would be, I might die. LOSE you - no, I'm first to tell - LOVE you, this, our first Noel.

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Date: 12/27/2024 4:44:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.
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David Crandall
Date: 12/27/2024 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Beata - Happy New Year!
Date: 12/24/2024 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 12/24/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 12/23/2024 6:23:00 PM
Lots of morphing going on here. A great entry Well deserved placement. Congrats.
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David Crandall
Date: 12/24/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Reason! Yep, things progressed pretty quickly in that poem.
Date: 12/23/2024 5:46:00 PM
Back with Congrats, David!
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David Crandall
Date: 12/24/2024 1:54:00 PM
Thanks, gotta watch out for that mistletoe.
Date: 12/23/2024 10:17:00 AM
Perfection xo
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David Crandall
Date: 12/23/2024 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Crystol!
Date: 12/4/2024 5:17:00 AM
So cute! Love it!
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David Crandall
Date: 12/4/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Kim!

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