Our First Night

Many months we have conversed
we take the decision to finally meet.
my introduction now rehearsed
for I am so longing to greet
this beauty oh so sweet.

Along the promenade we walked
the wind blowing her lovely hair.
swapping giggles as we talked
admiring what she wears
for in her eyes I long to stare.

Our hotel room we finally reach
still chatting, holding hands.
kissing between our wanting speech
relenting to our wanting demands.
two desiring to share their commands.

Face to face, touch of lips
adventurous hands in loving glide.
to the floor our clothes slip
falling before our pride
naturally we sensuously guide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Deane Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Lovely piece James, never stop writing...
Sweetheart Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 6:22 AM
thankxx James for your wonderful words on my poetry.. always a joy to read your lovely lines..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 3:28 PM
A wonderful poem about a wonderful night. Nothing better than that , James. Congratulations.
Mannan Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 9:33 PM
A sensuous experience. Many congrats dear friend.
Freeman Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Good to see you in the top ten, James. Congratulations on your honored 9th place. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 2:36 PM
Congrats James on your great big win in Francine's contest with these awesome words luv... enjoy another top ten victory where the air is as rare as your lovely words luv..
Guzzi Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest James. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Wow! Such a sensual rendezvous, James. many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Horne Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Many congrats, James : ) Jack
Roberts Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 10:38 AM
congrats on your 9th place win in the contest James, you made me swoon, this one had it all
Peranteau Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 8:05 PM
So gentle dear poet, your soft touching romantic heart splurging poetically; enticing the reader...especially us single ones who have much desire for the soul who posses such heart ! Great write Sir ! have a great weekend James ! much love, james
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Oh, How witty you are and what a flow of words creating a pen picture of a perfect romance, James
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Great images, James. Congrats on your win : ) Jack
Song Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 2:36 PM
James, Not for a contest? Hold onto this one! Romancing the stone and full of imagery! Another title....in the heat of the night. Well done, my friend! Gwendolen
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