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Our First Night

Many months we have conversed we take the decision to finally meet. my introduction now rehearsed for I am so longing to greet this beauty oh so sweet. Along the promenade we walked the wind blowing her lovely hair. swapping giggles as we talked admiring what she wears for in her eyes I long to stare. Our hotel room we finally reach still chatting, holding hands. kissing between our wanting speech relenting to our wanting demands. two desiring to share their commands. Face to face, touch of lips adventurous hands in loving glide. to the floor our clothes slip falling before our pride naturally we sensuously guide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2011 11:34:00 AM
Lovely piece James, never stop writing...
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Date: 3/26/2011 6:22:00 AM
thankxx James for your wonderful words on my poetry.. always a joy to read your lovely lines..luv..
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Date: 3/25/2011 3:28:00 PM
A wonderful poem about a wonderful night. Nothing better than that , James. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/24/2011 9:33:00 PM
A sensuous experience. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:38:00 PM
Good to see you in the top ten, James. Congratulations on your honored 9th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:36:00 PM
Congrats James on your great big win in Francine's contest with these awesome words luv... enjoy another top ten victory where the air is as rare as your lovely words luv..
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:26:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:15:00 AM
Wow! Such a sensual rendezvous, James. many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:03:00 AM
Many congrats, James : ) Jack
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:38:00 AM
congrats on your 9th place win in the contest James, you made me swoon, this one had it all
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:05:00 PM
So gentle dear poet, your soft touching romantic heart splurging poetically; enticing the reader...especially us single ones who have much desire for the soul who posses such heart ! Great write Sir ! have a great weekend James ! much love, james
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:40:00 PM
Oh, How witty you are and what a flow of words creating a pen picture of a perfect romance, James
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Date: 3/17/2011 3:11:00 PM
Great images, James. Congrats on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 3/17/2011 2:36:00 PM
James, Not for a contest? Hold onto this one! Romancing the stone and full of imagery! Another title....in the heat of the night. Well done, my friend! Gwendolen
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