Our First Kiss

Striking lightening 
these hands were shaking 
trembling underneath you're touch electrifying 
so eager to please you my love 
this love forever pines away 
each drifting view inside 
a desert oasis with you 

An angel's voice sweetly sings 
out chants magic every word 
so sweet my unforgettable dream 

Inside this you are darling 
shining brightest of all stars 
liquid silver shivering 
inside the moon begins to weep 
sweet starlight crystals winking droplets fall 
love you are each and every one 

A beautiful memory lasts forever 
touching so deeply reality 
dreaming soft treasure always 
waving lips of desire 
that I will never forget 
as long as I should ever live, 
the very first kiss 
joining lips breathtaking 
with you my love complete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Liam...this is so beautiful. I love how you address your beloved...Love! So pretty and perfect. I love how you love nature and bring it all into play with your writes. Kisses...it doesn't get better than that!
Chircop Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 5:27 PM
That kiss...Isn't it beautiful?And yes a memory can last forever-Romantic!!Charma
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 3:43 PM
oh yes, that first GOOD kiss, it lasts forever in the memory. You made it come alive with shimmering imagery.
Allison Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 1:06 PM
eautiful imagery in this tender romantic write Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
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