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Our First Date 'Poet's Dozen'

His Eyes were hazel Corners wrinkled when he smiled Hark I was in love His kindness blew my mind A heart so big, I’d never find The boat was packed All I could think of, was the ways he was moving his hands Years later when I am reflecting back Our journey hasn’t been short of tough Won’t say our life has had no lack But our deep love was forever enough Even when we made uncountable guff January 5, 2015 “Written for the contest 'Poet's dozen' sponsored by Silent One”

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Date: 2/3/2016 10:05:00 PM
Hi Rahy, thank you for the kind reply. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 7:23:00 PM
Rahy, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 2/3/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Linda. Sorry for my late response... Hugs, Rahy
Date: 1/9/2016 6:28:00 PM
Great story and win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Joyce... A true story :) Filled with both ups and downs; but at the end love endured... Love, Rahy
Date: 1/9/2016 3:42:00 PM
Rahy, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Skat... So glad that you are still here. Your encouraging comments mean a lot to me. Love, Rahy
Date: 1/8/2016 3:47:00 AM
Rahy, Im melting with the love I see in your lines, romantic and true.. =`) Smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/8/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Olive... This is a true story.. :) Appreciate you taking the time and reading it. Hugs, Rahy
Date: 1/5/2016 3:12:00 PM
Great entry. Good luck in contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/8/2016 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Joyce... Your kind wishes mean a lot to me. Hugs, Rahy

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