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our final farewell

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Bitesize contest 108 sponsored by Line Gauthier 4/11/25

 



ashes are scattered
he’s now dust in the wind ~
goodbye my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Paul Callus
Date: 4/15/2025 3:24:00 PM
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Sad, but it deserves its emotional aura, Jan. Sorry I've not been visiting lately, but life has been hectic (definitely not something new lol). Regards & hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 3:49:00 PM
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Hi Paul I hope you and Sheila and the girls are doing well. I'm not as active on soup either but life does certainly keep us busy. sending love to all:-) hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/13/2025 10:27:00 PM
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Great though sad senryu, Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 3:48:00 PM
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I never know what my muse will come up with next Andrea! hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/13/2025 4:19:00 AM
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With an old nickname of dusty blue, I’ve heard this one many times but it’s a sorrowful melody under the circumstances of your poem.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2025 3:47:00 PM
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thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/11/2025 2:58:00 PM
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That song always haunted me. We had so many deaths of students, it was in the paper. This song would play on the radio. Hugs. A sad write
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/11/2025 3:10:00 PM
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It is a haunting song Kim, hugs jan xx

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