Premiere Contest WinnerOUR FATHER

He came to me when I was dark
		                 and shone me in His light.

He touched me when I felt thin,
		                  withered and dry.

He took my tears, my need to cry
		                  and shook them gentle with a heavenly sigh.

He spoke of faith without use of word,
		                  an omnipotent caress my heart heard:

The answer to oneness, Fulfillment and content Lies not in idle questions But in faith sincerely spent; Simple acceptance of His love to possess Is all our need, All joy to profess.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gondolf Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 5:22 PM
CayCay, I'm not sure how I missed this one, congrats on your trophy win. John
Carber Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Congrats on your win- a lovely poem!
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your $1 win. An inspiring prayerful message. Enjoyed!
Barden Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, CayCay - blessings for many more, my friend! :-)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Congrats on a spiritual poem winning.
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October 31, 2015 at 12:25 AM
CayCay, Congrats on your nice win, have a nice one on Halloween, LUV SKAT
Terry Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Very well written, CayCay. The faith of a child, His child. Our Father does guide us in all things if we just listen to our heart. Congrats on placing in Casarah's contest.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:27 PM
WEll done. Fewer than half the entries made the list, so your 15th poem was a GOOD one!! Congrats, and can't wait to hear your latest news.
Wigley Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:38 AM
Amen to that, CayCay, faith, no matter how little,is all we need. Congratulations on your win, Viv x
A. Sharma Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Congrats on superb win Caycay with this amazing write! Thnx for ur kind visit to my page!
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Congrats CayCay on this divine win!
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Balveen. More of a noticing than a win, but I'm happy just the same ... CayCay
Stafford Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Very nice and yes he is OUR FATHER ....:) Thank you for your comment on my poem.
Godwin Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:41 PM
I'm glad you liked it. I regret I am so late thanking you, poems have a tendency to scroll out of sight and I didn't realize you were here. BUT I am glad to find you and I do thank you ... CayCay
Cwiak Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:43 PM
What a beautiful way to express thanks in the goodness of the Lord. Great write.
Godwin Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 9:20 AM
I am so glad it resonated with you, Dan. When I need to lift my emotions above sadness or pain, I often recite the words as prelude to prayer. Thank you for commenting ... CayCay
Gifford Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:56 PM
I liked this poem a lot, CayCay. And especially the part where you said you heard God. This poem is full of meaning and feelings. A 7. ~~Blessings, Darlene
Godwin Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene. This one means a lot to me, it spilled out in one writing and continues to resonate with me. Sometimes I think a 'natural write' is God holding the pen ... Blessings, CayCay
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