Our Effervescence

Line of inquiry: 
"conjoined with the whole
we play our life role
exuding a scent
granting love consent"

Hope in us glows triumphant as our faith grows spreading peace of blissful blessing-flows along God's grace* to defy doubts and subdue woes. Love from us does shine radiating nature of the divine as we strive to stay inside compassion's line marked by kindness, freed from jurisdiction of "only mine." Joy midst us is surely contagious as we treat all the Lord's creation as indeed precious forgiving and caring for one another, prayerfully conscious always wishing the best for each other to become victorious.
* 2 Corinthians 9:8 And God is able to make all grace abound toward you; that ye, always having all sufficiency in all things, may abound to every good work. August 20, 2025 10th place, "Our Effervescence" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker; judged on 9/3/2025
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August 21, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Nicely done, Beata! This should do very well indeed in the contest. If I was the judge...it would receive high marks. :) john
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