Our Echo

Always there 
hidden close 
thoughts on fire 

lips swollen
eyes that bleed
mad dancing

kissing truth 
still shunning
our echo grew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 22, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Hmm.. this could be interpreted in different ways...the second stanza indicates pain, the last stanza distance...
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December 22, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Probably a bit of both. :)
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