Home » Poems » Cheryl Hoffman » Our Daily Dance

Our Daily Dance

Our love is a dance for the ages slowly swaying as we turn life's pages two kindred spirits who dance to the same beat daily synchronized steps with our love worn feet 2-13-18

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Pat Adams

Date: 2/22/2018 5:11:00 PM

That's a lot of wallop for 4 lines! Enjoyed this. A well deserved win. The poem makes me feel kind of ...............anxious! Great write!!!............80).....pat

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/22/2018 8:10:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate the stop by!~Che :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 3:07:00 PM

Totally charming, Cheryl. Congrats on your most deserving win.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/18/2018 9:44:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 6:29:00 PM

This is really cool, Cheryl. I'm going down the winner list and it's in my top ten! Congrats for your win.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/15/2018 7:59:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; I'm glad you enjoyed it; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2018 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations Cheryl on your win. Regards Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Tom; Really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 12:06:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Cheryl :) - hugs and happy Valentines day :) // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 9:01:00 AM

Sounds so lovely and may you dance forever... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 9:33:00 AM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the 2nd place winners Silent One ~as its always a wonderful surprise for me! Thanks for the kind congrats and Happy Valentines Day!~Che :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 8:53:00 AM

Wow! Cheryl, These four lines are very romantic. Nice flow and rhymes. It looks like a winner to me. Ps, Happy Valentine's Day:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 9:25:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Alexis; glad you enjoyed my poem and thanks for encouragement too! Happy Valentines Day!~Che :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/14/2018 5:46:00 AM

Very true and lovely indeed...I love this line,"daily synchronized steps with our love worn feet" All the best Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Arturo; glad you especially liked the last line in my poem~All the best to you too and Happy Valentines Day!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 3:32:00 AM

- Together as one ... lovely written Cheryl :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anne-Lise; as well as the encouragement for the contest…Happy Valentines Day!~ hugs~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2018 12:40:00 AM

Soup has certainly been struck by Cupids arrow, hope all this love and romance spills out into the world. Happy Valentines day. Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; hope it spills out into the world also and Happy Valentines Day to you too!~Che :) PS And thanks for contest encouragement as well! :)