Our Creation

when the moon shines
its passionate light
let me stand in the 
glow of heaven
the essence of your heart

give me the stars to
rest around you
candles that forever burn
feed the flames that
torch my desires

take me into the clouds
my hungry yearning
feed me the feathery
touch of your kisses
soft as the break of dawn

lift me into the universe
exploding into the night
the streak of a comet
that ignites the atmosphere
blaze me into your soul

rest with me in the creation
of our personal paradise
pleasure that shines 
inside our famished hearts
we have designed our love

fade with me into the morn
our devotion to eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 28, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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