Our Cottage

Down in the valley all is calm
A simple cottage full of charm
Two people in love, lie the day
As lips meet and hearts play

Sunlight trickle the tiny windows
Highlights love in passions throws
Shadows dance the sensual sheets
Bodies bathe of each others needs

Arms enfold as the log fire burns
Kisses press, as desire yearns
A sanctuary of untold paradise
Let no one take or jeopardize

Red Roses climb the walls
Gently, softly, the sun it falls
And to my heart it whispers love
A memory kissed by skies above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations so happy to read your well deserved featured poem this week Daniel. Love, Carol
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October 7, 2012 at 9:39 PM
this is such a beautiful interaction of words. Really Nice poem Daniel. COngrats on it being featured, glad to have the chance to read it - Shaz
Clark Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:12 AM
More romatic love.......ah to know this heart! J
Fraser Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Another beautiful poem Daniel, my you are on a roll >> James
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 6:42 AM
What a beautiful poem. Thank you Daniel for sharing it. Love, Carol
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January 26, 2010 at 5:11 AM
This reads like a classic poem from the British Romantic period, Daniel. I enjoyed sharing the magic of this cottage through the lovers' eyes. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:20 PM
A painting in poetic words... passionate and emotional.. full of the stuff luv is made of.. wonderful write Daniel.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mills Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Wow... "shadows dance the sensual sheets"; I like your poem a lot! Thanks! -Susan Mills
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