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Down in the valley all is calm A simple cottage full of charm Two people in love, lie the day As lips meet and hearts play Sunlight trickle the tiny windows Highlights love in passions throws Shadows dance the sensual sheets Bodies bathe of each others needs Arms enfold as the log fire burns Kisses press, as desire yearns A sanctuary of untold paradise Let no one take or jeopardize Red Roses climb the walls Gently, softly, the sun it falls And to my heart it whispers love A memory kissed by skies above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/9/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations so happy to read your well deserved featured poem this week Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:39:00 PM
this is such a beautiful interaction of words. Really Nice poem Daniel. COngrats on it being featured, glad to have the chance to read it - Shaz
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:12:00 AM
More romatic love.......ah to know this heart! J
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:46:00 PM
Another beautiful poem Daniel, my you are on a roll >> James
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Date: 1/26/2010 6:42:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. Thank you Daniel for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:11:00 AM
This reads like a classic poem from the British Romantic period, Daniel. I enjoyed sharing the magic of this cottage through the lovers' eyes. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:20:00 PM
A painting in poetic words... passionate and emotional.. full of the stuff luv is made of.. wonderful write Daniel.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/25/2010 2:17:00 PM
Wow... "shadows dance the sensual sheets"; I like your poem a lot! Thanks! -Susan Mills
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