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Our Coral Atoll

 
                 

                          ~ Our Coral Atoll ~
 


Like incense fills the valves of  the chambers of my soul.
Love for life, like a gentle river, totally flooded me.
Once you came and remained, my sole bright, coral love atoll.

Everlastingly gleaming in God's sunlight and moonlight, 
Ever lifting me to new insights,as a stunning velvet blue butterfly,
Resting on our quilt, on this siver, moon-blessed night

Your love, your hands, your deep Mediterranean eyes,gleaming.
As that eternal instant we met in our cafe, divine kismet!
My most precious darling, man, our love forever flowering?

                              11/29/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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November 30, 2024 at 7:09 PM
So heartwarming, Pangie!
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November 30, 2024 at 8:28 AM
Hi Pangie, a beautiful poem of love two hearts beating as one.
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November 30, 2024 at 11:21 AM
God bless.
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November 30, 2024 at 10:07 AM
What a sweet comment, John. Yes, romance and love are truly amazing aren’t they?? I hope you have a blessed day. Thank you.. Pabigie. Xx
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November 29, 2024 at 10:39 PM
You are the queen of romance Pangie, I'm sure it's not a fictional write. Tom
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November 30, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Such a great compliment, Rom, those feelings eternally motivate me to write, there is much I still have noot written about. I’d like yo pen as a story, more than a poem. Pangie xx
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November 29, 2024 at 7:17 PM
A beautiful romantic poem for today. Very vivid and romantic.
Romios Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, sweet poetess! I enjoy authhoring poems on those I Love! These people appear more than once in my humble works. Each one contributed much to my life. God bless them all. Pangie xx
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