Our Claim To Fame

Our Claim to Fame

A man is more than his name
But a name that lacks honor
Will leave a man lame.
In this life and the next,
Our struggles will define
Our life in the text--
How our immortal soul
Should be counted:
Will it pay the toll?

Spiritually speaking,
Rationality
We should be seeking.

Morally self-control
Is a vital key
To making us whole.

And, socially,
Justice must be
Sought more than vocally.

The lesser struggle--
As a final resort,
Or nothing but trouble.

Wisdom spoken…well and good,
But wisdom needs action.
This must be understood.

Without real effort,
Our life is vague
And nothing but hurt.

Live long and without regret,
In service to others--
And even better yet…

A truly righteous life
To honor our maker
Without discord or strife.

When death draws nigh
And God’s questions are posed,
Honor answers with head high.

Now clear to all our claim to fame:
A man arrived
With an honored name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 8:56 PM
"A man is more than his name But a name that lacks honor Will leave a man lame." How true. The very opening lines are a beautiful prologue to the topic given. Lead a righteous life, live without regret in service to others and fill life with wise actions. If so we stand with a rightful claim to fame. A beautiful reminder of a poem, dear Danny. All the Best.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:58 PM
great advice within the lines of your poem. I especially liked: Wisdom spoken…well and good, But wisdom needs action. This must be understood.
Derden Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Thanks so much!
Beaufort Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Danny, honor is one of the key elements that makes a democratic society function. You touch on several of the other qualities here as well. Insight you do have. Smiles!!
Derden Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Thank you sir!
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