"our Castle In the Rain"

The forecast calls for rain tonight...
We can hide away and make it right...
A staircase to places where we can 
spend some time...
Read you words that shelter your desire
like fine aged wine...
We can jingle jangle like two keys 
on a chain...
Rubbing together while making sparks 
that light even in the rain...
Our hearts beating to the sound of water 
dancing on the rooftop...
All things in place, a night we can't stop...
Our castle is made, the bridge is washed
out...
We hold each other close and just echo's of
passion that shouts...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 12:36 AM
That castle sure sounds like it is magical--thanks for giving us a sneak peek of what could go in there-- you sure got romantic in your name, Michael ;)-- nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Awesome title Michael, followed by a super poem. I just love it, it oozes sheer love and warmth. You have that in abundance >> James
Shetley Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Very nice, I appreciate so much the sentiments in this.
M V Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 3:34 AM
Very sweet,friend.'We can jingle,jingle like two keys.....'I enjoyed it very well
Neels Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 1:25 AM
Awesome romantic write Mr. F really enjoyed having a look inside your castle... Love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Well that Castle sounds like a lovely place indeed and how perfect that the White Knight should pen this rare beauty ..u had me at rubbing together while making sparks.. must show Ron that line..luv.. and the passion in this piece is awesome as always ... the Jersey Girl is on fire.. and Ron won't be here till the midnight hour..luv..
Roberts Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 6:28 PM
wow, I love that, nice one Michael
. Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Wow! simply 'enchanting'! loved it Michael. thanks for stopping by :D
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Very very romantic and passionate poem, Michael
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November 12, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Very romantic poem,somebody is a lucky lady.Thank you for your wonderful comment on mine.Sandra
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