Our Brutal Rooms

In the canvas of twilightish insanity Appear pomegranate designs of passion An intellectual dance of day flowing into night In the sea inside skull, the heartbeats of humanity Vibrating with rurality towards urbanity Get oxidized in the lemon and salt of mundanity No concern for the formality of meter and iamb And thus blooms out the filigree of feelings Beautiful Sylvia Plath effect revealing They invite us to the mirror Of our reality of current disintegration Reeking of brutality and volcanity Collapsing rhythm joyously spells fatality And cheerfully grows an inanity of mentality Eating into our diamonds of morality You often say you will return and love Are you afraid of the expanding emptiness And the vitality-sapping black holes? We do not know why profanity is considered a value We do not know where our brutal rooms lead to We only see green leaves dropping dead every day __________________________________________________ 25/01/2017 Word Challenge - Poetry Contest hosted by Silent One
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Congrats for your high placement friend. This is absolutely fabulous. A wise use of those given words. It do deserve more than 7! :)
Gupta Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 5:41 AM
Thank you, Sunita ...
Warrior Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...job well done...god bless...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Thank you ...
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Very well done. Congratulations :)
Gupta Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you ...
Murray Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 3:39 PM
So that's how it should be done? Wow!! I see a number one.
Gupta Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:01 AM
You always encourage ... Thank you ...
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Nice job on a tough challenge, Probir. Good luck my friend:)
Gupta Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:32 AM
brilliant choice of words, which blend so well within the structure of the poem..
Gupta Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, dear reader ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Too powerful for me dear, Probir! Excellent execution of Silent's challenge! A seven.
Gupta Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
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