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Our Brutal Rooms

In the canvas of twilightish insanity Appear pomegranate designs of passion An intellectual dance of day flowing into night In the sea inside skull, the heartbeats of humanity Vibrating with rurality towards urbanity Get oxidized in the lemon and salt of mundanity No concern for the formality of meter and iamb And thus blooms out the filigree of feelings Beautiful Sylvia Plath effect revealing They invite us to the mirror Of our reality of current disintegration Reeking of brutality and volcanity Collapsing rhythm joyously spells fatality And cheerfully grows an inanity of mentality Eating into our diamonds of morality You often say you will return and love Are you afraid of the expanding emptiness And the vitality-sapping black holes? We do not know why profanity is considered a value We do not know where our brutal rooms lead to We only see green leaves dropping dead every day __________________________________________________ 25/01/2017 Word Challenge - Poetry Contest hosted by Silent One

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Date: 2/3/2017 5:00:00 PM
Congrats for your high placement friend. This is absolutely fabulous. A wise use of those given words. It do deserve more than 7! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/4/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita ...
Date: 2/2/2017 2:13:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...job well done...god bless...^WW^
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/3/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/1/2017 10:24:00 AM
Very well done. Congratulations :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2017 10:58:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/25/2017 3:39:00 PM
So that's how it should be done? Wow!! I see a number one.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2017 11:01:00 AM
You always encourage ... Thank you ...
Date: 1/25/2017 9:14:00 AM
Nice job on a tough challenge, Probir. Good luck my friend:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 1/25/2017 6:32:00 AM
brilliant choice of words, which blend so well within the structure of the poem..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/25/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, dear reader ...
Date: 1/25/2017 2:51:00 AM
Too powerful for me dear, Probir! Excellent execution of Silent's challenge! A seven.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/25/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...

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