Our Broken World

Years ago when I was a young boy
The world was a nice place there was plenty of joy
I'm older now and wiser too
And I've seen the evil that men can do.

Pick up the paper or watch the TV
No more good news or is it just me ?
I look around and what do I find
A world full of terror that's affecting mankind.

Men have twisted religion and suited it for their needs
They think Gods on their side whilst they commit wicked deeds 
You can not oppose them for they will kill you
You have to go with their ways its all you can do.

There are oppressed communities living in fear
They call out for help but the world doesn't hear
More often than not help arrives too late
By then some have met with a terrible fate. 

There is no prayer book that says to kill or to maim
They carry out evil in their 'Gods' name
They're brainwashed by others with a twisted mind
Their 'God' must be evil not the one who is kind.

But there is hope look around and you'll see
People doing good deeds selflessly
It helps restore your faith in humanity
And you think to yourself that's how it should be.

Written on 22nd November 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/28/2023 3:52:00 PM
Tom, I can relate to what you have written! I feel the same about this broken world, and I realize that I have no control except over me, so I must do whatever I can to do good in the world around me. Wonderful message and writing, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 1/28/2023 11:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance, sadly since I wrote this things have got a lot worse, climate change, wars and conflicts everywhere. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 1/27/2023 6:36:00 AM
Tom: You have precisely expressed what is happening in the world today as opposed to a more peaceful time. We are witnessing the return of Woden and it doesn’t bode well. Glad I visited one of your older poems. Best, SuZ
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Suz, one of my earlier ones, I never remember it being that bad years ago, terrorisim was unheard of. Mankind will be the cause of his own destruction the way things are going. Tom
Date: 9/11/2022 4:14:00 AM
This is exactly how I too feel. The world has changed so drastically from what I have seen in my young days. Now TV and news papers bring us news of war and rebellion, rape and molestation, theft and violent death. We wonder where all goodness has flown away. Of course there are good people who keep the world going. They stay as beacons of light in darkness
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I fully agree, years ago there was no terrorism and the world was a peaceful place. Yes you had the odd conflict but not on the scale we're seeing now. Tom
Date: 10/29/2021 6:24:00 AM
Men are “right” in their own eyes…very sad indeed.
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim, their way or no way and they interpret their teachings for their own agenda. Tom
Date: 1/19/2018 5:45:00 AM
- A wonderful poem with hope for our world, Tom - The changes are huge and it worries me - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 9:48:00 AM
Too many changes happening too fast, technology has played a large part in my view.But hopefully good will overcome evil in the end.glad you enjoyed it Anne-Lise. Regards Tom
Date: 1/16/2018 3:01:00 PM
Bravo Tom, so many issues in the world are done 'in the name of religion' :-( I do like the uplifting ending Tom there is hope for us all:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:29:00 PM
Sadly Jan the world is pretty screwed up. But thankfully there are some great people out there doing great things for mankind. Regards Tom
Date: 12/21/2017 10:00:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 12/15/2017 12:50:00 AM
I wrote a piec a while ago titled “Broken People” you might enjoy it. This piece is filled with wisdom.
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