Our Bliss At It's Purest We Loved Each Others Naked Sight

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A Robert J. Lindley and Brenda Chiri collaboration 
Rhyme, 8-31-2018

Note- My dear friend and wonderful co-author, truly a great pleasure composing this romantic piece with you and being amazed at the romantic depths and magnificent beauty of your verses. Your passionate reply weds the path and rising level of love that grows within nights of heated, sensual pleasures that lovers oft remember as their most treasured gems!
Thank you my dear friend, for your friendship, and your composing with me..

Our Bliss At It's Purest We Loved Each Others Naked Sight


When our love, its hottest and satisfying nights first begun
we each tried to give our all and not ever be outdone.
In that effort, soft showers of love-hearts began to pour
birthing swelling streams leading straight to paradise shores.
Within its spacious gardens, we walked in bliss, hand in hand
With our spirits singing, praise be this sweet rewarded land.

With eager hearts seeking, we sailed across heavenly blue seas
Tender love words speaking, we each wrote forever love pleas.

For precious are those diamond memories, deep their treasures
Never could such be destroyed, not those screaming pleasures!
Passion at its zenith, our burning desires at their greatest height
our bliss at its purest, we loved each other's naked sight.
O' the softness of your loving-heart and welcoming thighs
we felt heaven thanking it gifts, with both our contented sighs.

Those days are eternally burned, into this grateful soul
if time could us return, on that list we would both enroll.

Those  fledgling nights created so much more than simple heat
gave such passion never to be outshone, joined as 
one made complete
Caresses, of those soft showers remade this
broken woman into more
Bathed in your paradise, unfettered I can soar 
Joined as one, under the gentle gaze of the burning stars upon us
Lost in blissful moments 
all around us recedes to what once was
 
The beauty within our hearts had a rhythm wanted by all
With the strength of our bonds we answered loves call
 
Rich in memories, such wealth is written in soul 
and in mind
no other in any lifetime 
could compare to you I find
The heaven's can't contain the love that we two share
at the highest height of our passion none can compare  
Intense heat from our bodies is what gave those stars their light
Our bliss at its purest, we loved each others naked sight
 
My soul too will be eternally grateful for you my greatest love
as the stars and galaxies all rejoice over the love we share from above

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A Robert J. Lindley and Brenda Chiri collaboration 
Rhyme, 8-31-2018

Note- My dear friend and wonderful co-author, truly a great pleasure composing this romantic piece with you and being amazed at the romantic depths and magnificent beauty of your verses. Your passionate reply weds the path and rising level of love that grows within nights of heated, sensual pleasures that lovers oft remember as their most treasured gems!
Thank you my dear friend, for your friendship, and your composing with me..

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Date: 9/3/2018 10:38:00 AM
A great duet...makes a perfect pair...Superb collab my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you my very good friend. Brenda shines with her hot romantic verses.
Date: 9/2/2018 7:49:00 PM
This masterpiece is so eloquent. A divine gift of love shared within your lines. "soft showers of love-hearts began to pour" This collaboration is a keeper for me and going into MyFaves. Congratulations to you both on creating this memorable poem! xxoo
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Always a great pleasure when you visit my page! Both Brenda and I put our all into this piece and her fine verses put the romantic heat into this our poem.. Thanks my dear friend for the fav...
Date: 9/2/2018 3:59:00 PM
You write so eloquently together I have enjoyed your creative endeavor. Thank you for sharing, Have a great day
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/3/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you my good friend. I am very pleased you enjoyed this collaboration that both Brenda and I put our hearts into.. My dear friend Brenda , presented such exquisite romantic verses. Have a great day my good friend..
Date: 9/1/2018 3:55:00 PM
A beautiful poem which love flows through it. Can feel the love between the man and wife. Very well done.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. I am very pleased that you found our collaboration to be a worthy poem to comment on. Love in marriage is the foundation for a happy, prosperous and well adjust family. Love begets children, that beget more love...
Date: 9/1/2018 2:39:00 PM
A beautiful romantic, passionate poem; I love this line: "birthing swelling streams leading straight to paradise shores." You two do work well together; keep feeding our poetic cravings, please.
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you my friend, for your heart warming reply. Very pleased that you have found our romantic collaboration a pleasant one to read and ponder this morn. Poetic cravings are the fire that make us read, write and present to others in hope our words do good and are appreciated for their beauty, creativity, imagination, worthiness, content and inspirations.
Date: 8/31/2018 4:10:00 PM
A tremendous undertaking for you both..your poem flows with intense feelings of romance and love. A passionate depiction. Kudos to you both, Robert and Brenda.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2018 2:02:00 PM
Vijay my friend, thank you for your wonderful comment on this our passionate and hot romantic collaboration. My very talented writing partner definitely hit the golden mark with her beautifully hot verses of love and youthful passion.
Date: 8/31/2018 10:20:00 AM
My dear friend Robert, a passionate pulse does throb with beauty through your gorgeous and sensual collaboration with my immensely talented twin sis, Brenda. So rich in emotion and loving, desirous imagery, it leaves me in breathless awe at the majesty of your combined poetic artistry. Your luscious collaboration is filled with the shine of brilliant inspiration and the gold that flows from your combined pens. A superbly exquisite gem and A FAV! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/1/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. We wanted to present a romantic poem with a bit of spice in it. One that a lover may write to a cherished friend and soulmate about love's first hot blooming. With my dear friend Brenda, your talented twin sis, I think we accomplished our goal. Brenda came through with passionate and inspired verses and this collaboration was set to sail..
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