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Written, July 27, 2025
For the International Contest,  This Or That, Vol 35
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh

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"our invisible, celestial, sublime, beatific angels . . . " Quote by_Poet
when my father and mother died we were broken but knew they would be heavenly spirits dear God, we give you our angels, angels now guiding us . . . they are God's messengers no better angels could we have full of love, light and with beautiful souls because of our guardian angels we transcend when my baby and husband died I was shattered my baby lived a few hours in this life but that small angel has his wings we are sure he visits . . . is my husband with God for he committed suicide God, we pray that you give mercy for him in life he was kind, a giver, and a treasure when our grandma passed we were left with grief she was the family storyteller and reason I am a writer often, she guides my pen . . .

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Date: 7/27/2025 8:43:00 PM
oh you did this so beautifully. I don't feel like my dead relatives are guardians to me so this never even occurred to me. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 7/27/2025 3:26:00 PM
Amen.
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Date: 7/27/2025 3:05:00 PM
Your "our better angels" is a powerful/wonderful yet sad write. Our angels do watch over us until we meet again. "Good Luck" Have A Very Blessed Day Writing Away.................
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