Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Our Amazing Cleaning Lady

A sweet young thing comes to our humble abode
Once every month without fail
Sure ain't your average cleaner type person
She zooms through the place like a gale

A neighbour once noticed she had a cute li'l bum
I told him I wholeheartedly concur
We both could wind up with marital problems
Accused of being a couple of voyeurs

Once we thought of adopting this young sweetie
But her hubby would never agree
We had to settle for her once a month visits
Such a shame between you and me

It seems I might have lost my train of thought
My engine almost left the station
To get back to the fabulous job that she does
Sure appreciate her monthly visitation


© Jack Ellison 2013

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Harry Horsman March 2, 2013 at 4:26 AM this is wonderful Jack,, just love the story this poem creates, a joy to read... Jack Ellison March 2, 2013 at 5:05 AM Not your average type cleaning lady! LOL Thanks for dropping by my good friend!

Carol Eastman March 1, 2013 at 12:40 PM Does Eileen know something I don't? 'Naughty but Nice'... Are you Santa Clause? Why am I always the last to know!... Does the Elf union know you've been admiring her bum? Does Cathie know? Naughty Santa... Naughty Santa... Sigh... LOL Jack Ellison March 1, 2013 at 1:18 PM I'm innocent Your Honour! I was just agreeing trying to be a good neighbour! In all honesty I never even noticed her amazing li'l bumsy wumsy! LOL Please please please don't tell Cathie... the couch is REALLY uncomfortable! Hugsssss Naughty Santa! xoxoxox Carol Eastman March 1, 2013 at 12:43 PM If you like bums... Does that make you a bummer?... LOL

Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 10:05 AM Naughty Jack! But with you...I'm sure I can continue the saying..."Naughty but NICE!" Lovely poem..it made me smile. PLUS...having a nice derriere is a definite ASSet! ;) Jack Ellison March 1, 2013 at 1:13 PM Love ASSets! They're one of nature's marvellous wonders! LOL Hugs, Naughty Jack xox

Russell Sivey March 1, 2013 at 6:46 AM You are looking at the poor girl's bum my friend? I have a feeling this is just a poem, that you really don't look at her bum, you are too kind and respectable of a man to do that! I loved how you put together this incredible write of this girl's visits to your house, what does your wife think of her(ha ha)? What a funny little poem, you have written a clever write, Great Work!!

Guru Jad March 1, 2013 at 6:28 AM Wooow..... I am impressed.... I have never come across a poem appreciating a maid! This just marks out how your soul is genuine and sweet and humble! May God Bless your heart and pen, Sir!!