Our 20th Anniversary- Qd

Parallel to loneliness was I,
then day broke and I awoke with ease-
     lovely Autumn breeze and cobalt sky,
joy prevails and hopelessness does cease.

     A day when weeping willows don’t cry,
tangerine sunset between the trees-
          smiles resound in love we can’t deny,
we hold hands swearing true guarantees.

                                   Beautiful day renewing our vows.



Queen Of Day 9 x 9 Poetry Contest
Charles Messina
September 19, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/27/2019 5:57:00 PM
I especially love the second stanza Luloo and many congrats on your win and your long and happy marriage too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/20/2019 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 10/19/2019 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Lu Loo. Love the line "A day when weeping willows don’t cry" - Well penned.
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Date: 10/20/2019 12:58:00 PM
thank you lovely Line, hope all is well :)-luloo
Date: 10/19/2019 7:45:00 AM
Such a wonderful and beautiful write LU. I love the words you used to express this poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...also, Happy Anniversary when October comes. Hugs & Blessings ~Charlie
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Date: 10/20/2019 12:58:00 PM
thank you! It was the 12th...we had a great night. Daughter at grandma's and you know the rest...lol :) Thanks I am honored to place in this amazing contest :) -luloo
Date: 9/19/2019 8:40:00 AM
This is awesome. Love it. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:08:00 AM
many thanks dear Regina :)-luloo
Date: 9/19/2019 8:36:00 AM
So nice Laura, congrats on a wonderful write, I enjoy when others experience true love and not disappointment in their marriage, we are approaching 25 years so I know the feeling well!
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:08:00 AM
aww awesome! We are only at 17 years this October, but that day will be the most beautiful day for us. 2022 will come quickly! thank you dear John :)-luloo
Date: 9/19/2019 7:44:00 AM
Ah, beautifully done my friend. Bravo. Bravo.
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:07:00 AM
thank you! hugs and be blessed caring Caren :)-luloo
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