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Our 20th Anniversary- Qd

Parallel to loneliness was I, then day broke and I awoke with ease- lovely Autumn breeze and cobalt sky, joy prevails and hopelessness does cease. A day when weeping willows don’t cry, tangerine sunset between the trees- smiles resound in love we can’t deny, we hold hands swearing true guarantees. Beautiful day renewing our vows. Queen Of Day 9 x 9 Poetry Contest Charles Messina September 19, 2019

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2019 5:57:00 PM

I especially love the second stanza Luloo and many congrats on your win and your long and happy marriage too:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2019 4:18:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/19/2019 9:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Lu Loo. Love the line "A day when weeping willows don’t cry" - Well penned.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/20/2019 12:58:00 PM

thank you lovely Line, hope all is well :)-luloo

Charles Messina

Date: 10/19/2019 7:45:00 AM

Such a wonderful and beautiful write LU. I love the words you used to express this poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...also, Happy Anniversary when October comes. Hugs & Blessings ~Charlie

Lu Loo
Date: 10/20/2019 12:58:00 PM

thank you! It was the 12th...we had a great night. Daughter at grandma's and you know the rest...lol :) Thanks I am honored to place in this amazing contest :) -luloo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/19/2019 8:40:00 AM

This is awesome. Love it. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings

Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:08:00 AM

many thanks dear Regina :)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 9/19/2019 8:36:00 AM

So nice Laura, congrats on a wonderful write, I enjoy when others experience true love and not disappointment in their marriage, we are approaching 25 years so I know the feeling well!

Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:08:00 AM

aww awesome! We are only at 17 years this October, but that day will be the most beautiful day for us. 2022 will come quickly! thank you dear John :)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/19/2019 7:44:00 AM

Ah, beautifully done my friend. Bravo. Bravo.

Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:07:00 AM

thank you! hugs and be blessed caring Caren :)-luloo