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Ouch Lessons

“Ouch”… yet expressed in mirth’s glee “Uy”… that’s my brave boy, I see Careful should you be midst zest Hurt or strained; just do your best. Oopps … falling is milestone’s part Up you stand, and again start Child, let’s learn from pain of game Here’s my hand; success we’ll claim. Oh, life’s “ouch-ouch” is alright “Ugh” and “umm” blend with delight Cheers from God bring victory* Helping faith for sound “hurray.” *1John 5:4 For whatsoever is born of God overcometh the world: and this is the victory that overcometh the world, even our faith. September 23, 2021 Acrostic in jueju form 3rd place, " 'O' Contest, NEW POEMS" Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 9/24/2021.

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Date: 10/5/2021 8:06:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:48:00 AM
Progress for a special child often comes with ouches and boo boo's! But, that being said, the cheering at an achieved success seems to outweigh the struggle. Well said. Love your acrostic. Sending you blessings.
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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