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Ouch Footle

OUCH! Fists fly Black eye 08~11~14 Written for WRITE A FOOTLE contest sponsored by Judy Konos ~awarded 1st place~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 11:27:00 AM

Hi Jan, WOW..I missed all your old replies... thank you

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/19/2014 8:52:00 PM

Ha ha...ouch. Very good, Jan. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:49:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 5:02:00 PM

Many an eye, when fists fly, black, aye! - love it - <*> James

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 5:04:00 PM

Thanks James for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2014 5:48:00 PM

Oh!!! another excellent Footle. Well done Jan, and congrats on your top win. Did I hear somebody say this made an impact?!:)*$* {Returned last night from Paris; enjoyable holiday!}

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 5:51:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Paul i am flying high with great placement in contests recently. So lovely to see you back -glad you had an excellent break and I hope to see lots of romantic Parisian writes now:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 8:07:00 AM

Grats on your win!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Casarah - I may get good and write a decent poem one day LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2014 6:26:00 AM

Way to go ..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 7:16:00 AM

Many thanks Sara:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/18/2014 5:11:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine write, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 5:18:00 AM

thank you so much for your comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2014 3:33:00 AM

- Congratulations with first place in FOOTLE contest !!! - Well done, Jan ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise - it was harder to write than a longer poem! Hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2014 1:01:00 AM

how impactful, jan.. sweet congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 3:58:00 AM

Thank you for you lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:11:00 PM

Jan, ouch!!! Love it...Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 3:57:00 AM

Thanks Linda:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/17/2014 9:35:00 PM

I love this one....congrats on a great win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 3:57:00 AM

Many thanks Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/17/2014 7:42:00 PM

Jan, I love this clever piece! You really know how to do it! Congratulations on a beautiful first place win!!!Pandita

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 7:43:00 PM

Many thanks Pandita i was delighted to see my name on the list:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/17/2014 6:42:00 PM

Ha ha, you did well!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 6:43:00 PM

Thanks Richard:-) Hugs jan xxx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/17/2014 12:27:00 PM

Excellent footle.... God bless you and I'm sending you much love and prayers. Love and hugs :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 12:31:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Regina:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/17/2014 11:28:00 AM

Next time, maybe he'll duck !! lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 12:31:00 PM

LOL Thanks Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2014 11:19:00 AM

this one is very inventive, Jan. You are one of the few who told a story with yours. I usually just do definition footles with both syllables rhyming, so it's rare I do a story!! Congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 12:31:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea YOUR comments mean the world to me:-) Hugs Jan xxx