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'Ouch'

A man found himself in a pickle When his girlfriend found he was fickle He said "won't you stay" She said "there's no way" As she took his head off with a sickle. Josette Key 2010

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Date: 4/8/2011 3:50:00 PM
Great poem Josette, reminds me of the dog that lost his head trying to find a piece of tail.
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Date: 4/20/2010 4:46:00 AM
Ouch indeed, at least it was quick?
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Date: 4/19/2010 7:05:00 AM
I would say Ouch also. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Josette. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:17:00 AM
Clever Limerick , Josette . Like my old Gran used to say ; " don't ever lose your head , over a woman " ....
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM
nice one,P.D.
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:06:00 PM
LOL- Great!
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:55:00 PM
FUNNY AND GOOD WRITE
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:54:00 PM
FUNNY AND GOOD WRITE
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