'ouch'

A man found himself in a pickle
When his girlfriend found he was fickle
He said "won't you stay"
She said "there's no way"
As she took his head off with a sickle.







Josette Key    2010
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Culberson Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Great poem Josette, reminds me of the dog that lost his head trying to find a piece of tail.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Ouch indeed, at least it was quick?
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 7:05 AM
I would say Ouch also. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Josette. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:17 AM
Clever Limerick , Josette . Like my old Gran used to say ; " don't ever lose your head , over a woman " ....
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April 18, 2010 at 10:29 PM
nice one,P.D.
Green Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 10:06 PM
LOL- Great!
A  Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 9:55 PM
FUNNY AND GOOD WRITE
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April 18, 2010 at 9:54 PM
FUNNY AND GOOD WRITE
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