Paul Callus Poet Limerick

Ouch

In Sherwood Forest Friar Tuck
Fell down a ditch where he got stuck

Astride a broken branch
And, yes, I have a hunch

He waddles now like Donald Duck!

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Contest: Make Me Laugh
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
        Placed 3rd
Posted 25th November 2020

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Komal Walimbe May 13, 2022 at 9:32 AM Lol!!! A funny limerick Paul... Hope 'He' is ok!:D Paul Callus May 19, 2022 at 12:15 PM Thank you for the visit and your lovely smile, Komal. Pleased to make your acquaintance. ~ Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks April 15, 2021 at 5:28 PM Talk about some ruffled feathers :) Cute limerick, Paul... amusing image. I also liked the PG tone of it (could have gone down some crasser road with that "uck" rhyme).

Akkina Downing January 28, 2021 at 9:01 PM Lol... Nice one, Paul, and congrats on your win :) Paul Callus February 12, 2021 at 2:41 PM Thank you, Akkina. Please excuse the very late reply; many comments have gone astray cos I was not receiving notifications. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2020 at 7:58 AM Congratulations on your win. What a cute and funny limerick. You are putting smiles on many faces. Enjoy your win with blessings...................... Paul Callus December 22, 2020 at 12:36 AM Thank you very much, Paula. I find your visit truly enjoyable :) Wishing you a merry & blessed Christmas. // paul

Eve Roper December 20, 2020 at 9:25 PM Hahahaha... good one, Paul. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Paul Callus December 22, 2020 at 12:37 AM Thank you, Eve. So pleased you enjoyed :) Christmas greetings & hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2020 at 6:22 PM Yours is one of the best on the list. Congrats, my friend. Paul Callus December 20, 2020 at 1:10 AM Thank you, Andrea:) Taking this opportunity to wish you and yours a Merry & Blessed Christmas. // paul

Alexis Y. December 19, 2020 at 3:25 PM Hi Paul, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on you win. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis Paul Callus December 20, 2020 at 1:11 AM Thank you, Alexis. Hope you are enjoying the weekend. Warm regards // paul

Tania Kitchin December 19, 2020 at 3:57 AM Paul, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and fun limerick! Paul Callus December 19, 2020 at 4:03 AM Thank you, Tania. Glad you enjoyed. Wishing you merry season's greetings. // paul

Jennifer Proxenos December 9, 2020 at 10:10 AM Lol, Lol, great humor , poor Friar Tuck, now waddles like a duck, all because he landed astride a branch in Sherwood Forest, Great imagination my friend, best wishes in the contest. Warm regards and hugs Jenny. Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 8:28 AM I still don't know what made me write about Friar Tuck!:) Thank you the lovely comments, Jenny. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie December 8, 2020 at 4:47 PM Hello Paul … ouch indeed! I certainly had a painful giggle over your limerick Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 8:18 AM The important thing is that you got a laugh out of it:) Best regards // paul

Jack Horne December 6, 2020 at 12:22 PM LOL, yes, ouch indeed - love your humour, Paul Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you, Jack; your support is appreciated. Regards // paul

Paghunda Zahid December 3, 2020 at 6:51 AM Hahahaha very funny. Made me laugh Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 7:31 AM Glad it made you laugh, Paghunda:) Best regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2020 at 2:21 AM That is a funny image and imagined outcome. I can see you chuckling as you wrote this one. LOL SuZ Paul Callus December 12, 2020 at 6:42 AM Thank you, Suz. I'm pleased you enjoyed, my friend...hope you're enjoying also the weekend :) Regards // paul

Laura Leiser November 30, 2020 at 1:51 PM This is such funny, Paul! It made me smile! :) Paul Callus December 10, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thank you, Laura:) Goodnight. // paul

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2020 at 6:37 PM oh this made me almost giggle to think where the stick went!! GREAT job. yes, it's funny how we used similar words: oops or ouch! Paul Callus December 10, 2020 at 3:32 PM Pleased you enjoyed it, Andrea :) Regards // paul

Susan Ashley November 26, 2020 at 9:45 PM Haha! Oh, poor Friar Tuck! You tickle me with your humor, dear Paul. Such a great limerick! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my amusing friend.. ~Susan Paul Callus December 10, 2020 at 3:34 PM Thank you, Susan. Last comment for the night...my eyes are half closed (00.33am). Warm regards & Hugs my friend. // paul

Akkina Downing November 26, 2020 at 3:46 PM LOL!! So good, made me laugh :) Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thank you, Akkina...mission accomplished :) Regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 26, 2020 at 9:49 AM Ty for the yummy Holiday chuckles. You're the best, Paul. Have a Happy Thanksgiving Day, dear friend. Smiles and smiles of joy forever. Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 2:06 PM Pleased that you enjoyed, Freddie :) Hope you enjoyed Thanksgiving Day, my friend. All the best // paul

Angela Crabtree November 25, 2020 at 7:05 PM This made me smile :) Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:59 PM Thank you, Angela :) Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole November 25, 2020 at 7:02 PM Oh my !! Poor Friar Tuck- he now waddles like Donald Duck. I feel bad for him. I can't help but smile though, at your words. This is so cute. Clever and creative too. Thanks Paul, for making me laugh. :) Hugs, Brandy Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:59 PM Thank you, Brandy. To be honest I also felt sorry for poor Friar Tuck! Hope you always retain that lovely smile, my friend:) Hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu November 25, 2020 at 3:38 PM Hello Paul thank you for the humor. Regards Darlene Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:37 PM ..and thank you for visiting, Darlene :) Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh November 25, 2020 at 3:13 PM Ouch... oh my. Cute one, Paul. God bless you with a win :) Happy Thanksgiving Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:36 PM Thank you, Gina. Hope you had a lovely and blessed Thanksgiving. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2020 at 11:08 AM :))) ... well done ... luck in the cntest, made me laugh, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:36 PM So pleased you enjoyed, Anne-Lise...thank you! Regards & Hugs // paul

Alexis Y. November 25, 2020 at 10:48 AM Lol! Paul, I laughed out loud with this one. It's a winner in my book. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis Paul Callus December 3, 2020 at 1:35 PM I'm glad it made you laugh, Alexis :) Humour is the spice of life! ~ Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit November 25, 2020 at 9:45 AM Much humor in just a few lines--well done, Paul. Paul Callus November 25, 2020 at 10:10 AM Pleased you enjoyed, Vijay...thank you. Regards // paul

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