ou l'Optimisme

The name 
mistakenly saintly, 
the other one 
a rite-of-life, 
a gauche passage 
for some, for most
the contract costly,
imprints its meaning 
post firey baptismal dive
to rise again somehow
from each our own
calamities, the personal
cataclysm we confront
or shun in a parallel life 
of optimism, there each one 
observes what was and lingers
to kiss the font of the child 
within every one, each their own
version of the meaning 
of catechism,
forgotten by most, 
yet a lingering malaise 
swims in their waking, 
a sense of de je vu,
these are the incorrigible
pushing the envelope,
the timestamp licked
and mailed off 
to other voices 
that do not speak,
that do not arrive
through lips, yet
open sleeping minds
and hold the eyelids
to peer directly into 
and through to meet
that thing that powers 
the brain within,
to shine its glistening 
luminescence, one 
senses that thing
which is forgotten within,
is commissioned
to win the race of life,
and lose and then, 
win again - 
the losses mailed off 
in worldly corrupted 
creative ways, didactic,
where one revisits
as a dark shadow, 
standing with all
those other 
dark shadows,
frankly contemplating 
conversion, and the
salt-strewn stinging
many paths of logic 
through those
illogical clues
breadcrumbed 
by all those 
other shadows,
the eternal puzzle 
of understanding
the life viewed standing
under lamplight;
in the disillusioned 
poetic world,
we must forever
cultivate our garden,
that never-ending dream;
all is for the best, romantic
cliches and adventures,
falls and risings;
for those who think
they are normal 
and above it all,
above the others - 
all is never normal,
all is as it should be,
all is for the best,
we stumble and we fall,
some stay where they are, 
others get up again and again;
all is as it should be,
all is for the best,
ou l'Optimisme, 
Candide
a muse
amused
Candide,
all is as it should be
all is for the best




Candide Diderot. ‘24 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/5/2024 11:50:00 AM
Your poem is a philosophical musings, introspective reflections, and symbolic imagery. It invites readers to contemplate the complexities of life, the choices individuals make, and the eternal optimism that persists even in the face of challenges. The blend of literary references and original metaphors creates a unique and thought-provoking piece...
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Candide Diderot
Date: 1/5/2024 4:42:00 PM
“there but for the grace of God go I…”, whichever god one ascribes to. If at all. I had a philosophical moment. But no recruitment drive, whatsoever. Ponderings of the thing that sits inside me, watching.
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