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bow riding Dall's porpoises play sea otters, orcas and bald eagles every day herding salmon otter find another boat and some porpoise otter love you more like I did in Alaska otter mend this net love slips through reel it in carefully and stack it meticulously (setting it should never ensue disaster) a listless drifter I have been tempting storms and rocky shores otter live this life on porpoise like I did then choose a destination sail to better shores (oh, give me a home where the sea otters roam and the bow riding Dall's porpoises play) otter love you more like I did in Alaska

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Date: 8/10/2022 5:58:00 AM
Craftily penned Steven! Clever and cute. Linda
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Date: 8/10/2022 8:06:00 AM
Appreciate the comment, Linda. Crafty and cute --not usually my M.O., but I'll take it for this one ;) Thanks!

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