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She took long strides by the seaside, 
Weary and world-worried, she cried, 
The waves crashed in a misty roar, 
Etching frowns in a frothy hoar, 
She wondered at what would betide;

The sound of guitar by her side, 
Made her sigh and seem surprise-eyed, 
The smell of lilacs came to fore -
                        She took long strides;

Afraid now, she wanted to hide, 
But sudden slumber made her slide,
There she lay alone on the shore, 
When she stirred, her strength did restore, 
Troubles did cajole her no more, 
                        She took long strides. 

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Date: 9/2/2024 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creative talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/28/2024 4:59:00 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 8/27/2024 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo, Very nicely penned
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Date: 8/3/2024 9:31:00 AM
The last line is beautiful! And youve used the form and the prompts so well here dear Joanna! Great storytelling in such a poetic manner with vivid imagery: pleasure reading this. Best wishes
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:44:00 AM
Rich and enticing poetry. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/31/2024 12:21:00 PM
Music and lilacs did the trick. I'll have to try the combo next time I'm feeling low
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