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Other poets write of love Or beauty, anguish, death; Of yearning, angst or pity Tangled up in every breath. Other poets use their words As weapons or as shields, Gauging by reactions All the power writing yields. Other poets elevate Their subjects way up high, Seeking truth or explanations, Answers to their aching “Why?” I, though, on the other hand, Just write what I observe – The daily challenges in life We do or don’t deserve. Other poets’ lofty thoughts May, more than mine, be read, But I’ll continue rhyming Like I always do, instead.

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Date: 12/12/2018 11:43:00 PM
I love this!
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Date: 11/22/2018 7:11:00 PM
That's RIGHT, Ilene--Keep on rhyming. I plan to also! Janice
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Date: 11/21/2018 3:26:00 PM
Capturing the moment is an art that can endure for centuries, so continue to enjoy it! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/21/2018 8:56:00 AM
Well, as you know, I can go low and dwell in deep despair. :) But when I read a poem of yours, it's like breathing fresh air. :)
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Date: 11/21/2018 3:49:00 AM
- We're all different ... and thanks for that - I love your poems, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2018 5:09:00 PM
You are that poet who ever reminds us that a light heart is a content heart and that humor is soul food, I love that about each poem of yours I have read. On top of all that, you are a most gifted and talented poet, just as this poem confirms. Soup needs you, the world needs you ... CayCay
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Date: 11/20/2018 3:57:00 PM
Wow... my thoughts at this time exactly. I'm no poet, I can only share my experience. Although the last word was predictable "instead" the entire poem logically, rhythmically carried me along. And the word use is quite clever! Your contrasting approach to poetry answered my question where will she go? And I really enjoyed the attitude that your purpose to rhyme is to rhyme, and in contrast "instead" not seek validation. Thank you. I learned something. I appreciate your gift.
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Date: 11/20/2018 3:41:00 PM
I absolutely adore your rhyming style and snapshots of your life so cleverly put into words. Never change how you write as it is perfect! Rhyme will always be my preference when it comes to writing but I have learned many new forms since joining soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2018 3:34:00 PM
Good for you, Ilene! Stick to your style of poetry; I love it, and I am sure that there are others who feel the same. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/21/2018 8:58:00 AM
Ditto. :)
Date: 11/20/2018 3:28:00 PM
Although I've tried other forms I still love rhyme,, rhyme rocks. Well written Ilene. Tom.
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Date: 11/20/2018 3:15:00 PM
That's an awesome resolve, Ilene. Well penned.
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Date: 11/20/2018 3:00:00 PM
I love to read your observations, so uniquely in the moment, that relate to all of us Ilene, such as this little gem! : )
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Date: 11/20/2018 2:58:00 PM
Few have your talent for mixing rhyme with artful words Ilene
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