Ostracized Not Secularized

There was a man who was thought to be numb,
Some even said he was dumb,
But he tried to live a good life,
Married a wonderful wife,
And all his critics were bummed.

His friends were pretty sparse,
They'd rather he be a farce,
It's lonely to live in Truth of course,
One must be as strong as a horse,
...Much easier to be his ****.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 23, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Good morning, Robert how are you on this fine Sunday! Just stopping by to say hi and read this one again.. with smiles.. Take care and have yourself a blessed day,..p.d.
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January 19, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Interesting ...Hard to get all those syllables going..Good job..Sara
Austin Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 8:23 AM
They say "the truth will out" no matter what. Good write. Thanks for the invitation, but we are trying to pay for all the stray cats we're rescuing from the cold, namely four kittens - Spot, Fuzzy, Tiny and Midnight - who would have all perished on our front porch because of a virus they picked up. Love, Dave
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January 12, 2011 at 8:24 PM
This fella's friends could have learned a thing or two from this man. I love the last three lines of this double-limerick, Rob. Got a great laugh! Love, Carolyn
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January 10, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Robert, that is good that he taught everyone a lesson... enjoyed your poem,,p.d.
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