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Orphan way of Lifes perspective

On celebration day visited Orphanage Wishing to plant smile on orphan lips over sponsored dinner Surprised, Orphans greeted with warm smile as if family get together Meet Time catapulting perspective of living with grace Content faces, bitterness dissolved in sweet acceptance of life And in contrast my Lifes clock ticking all the time to accumulate Losing cultural values, gaining ego, hunting equilibrium of fate Meet raising curiosity to rewind Lifes clock for insight into materialistic strife Ashamed at life being worse than Orphans, resolved to live with cheer Since that time smile is uppermost in mind whether on self or others lips Heart with rein on anger and greed, life blissfully leaping forward in steps Meet unfolding, parents though best teachers Orphans this TIME more did offer -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- By Hitendra Mehta Entry for Members Contest - Once upon a "Time" by Barbara Gorelick

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Date: 12/3/2010 8:51:00 AM
Makes me sad to think how ungrateful we can be when the orphans find happiness in their hearts. Good luck in Barbara's contest, Hitendra! This poem is so moving. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 12/3/2010 3:06:00 AM
Beautifully written.Good luck,Hitendra
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:22:00 AM
Hitendra. What a sad thought provoking piece. Makes us appreciate what we have. Thanks for sharing this . Best of luck in the contest and thanks for your kind comments. Eamon
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:33:00 AM
A nice recollection of thoughts of the Orphnage. I too used to visit Child's home of the abused and disabled kids in 2000. Good luck, Hitendra
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today, hope you are having a great December.
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:26:00 PM
Wonderful thoughts, Hitendra. Orphans "living with grace" that was a great message. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:40:00 PM
An excellent entry and poignant message in your lines Hitendra.. good luck in BG's contest... I visit the children's hospitals and senior centers to read my poetry once or twice a week and make them booklets to keep with my poetry and their poetry from the entire year.. its a warm pleasure in life that nothing else can give.. good luck my friend.. an awesome write with luv..
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:25:00 PM
A beautiful inspiring write Hitendra, all the best for BG's contest ;-) blessings Wilma
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:01:00 PM
How inspiring, Hitendra! If these orphans can smile, we should do the same and count our blessings. What a great poem for Barbara's contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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