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Ornery Old Men

Good GOD you're a pain You crazy old fool! Stop bending my brain Oh yeah? Hate you too! Don't you SAY that! Call me one of those I'll make your lip fat Bust your skinny nose!... Hey man, what's shakin'? In the neighborhood What's that you makin'? Smells pretty good Nope not too hungry Gonna' rain I hear Nah, wasn't angry Got any beer?

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2013 10:02:00 AM

Tim! Hi! Loved this...It is just so so cute! You aren't in this category, are ya? Na! You are still young! Age is just a number! Hugs!

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/10/2013 6:48:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest Tim, made me smile this morning

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 11:31:00 AM

Good after noon TIM ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/14/2012 3:36:00 PM

a punch of a write, tim.. cheers to you for the fine win!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2012 3:20:00 PM

Well written for the contest Tim - congrats on your win ! - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 7/13/2012 2:46:00 PM

Tim, congrats on your win, well done..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2012 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in my contest Tim. Thank you so much for your support always. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/10/2012 6:57:00 PM

LOL!! Tim, Tim, Tim...lol...:D i'm too tickled to say anything else!! well done! love ya , deb

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/5/2012 5:34:00 PM

Being an 'ornery old man' myself I was drawn to your title! This is hysterical... it's like looking in the mirror for me! (well, some of it anyway!!) Well done, Tim!!! Best wishes, Keith

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/5/2012 10:53:00 AM

Sounds like my brothers when they get together - there's always a little of bravado who's toughest, etc. then they get the beer.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/5/2012 10:39:00 AM

i like male bonding.. and part of this is beer!.. grreat work,tim; it is so alive!... winning wishes and huggs!

David Williams

Date: 7/5/2012 8:37:00 AM

Tim, quick spats, I like them..good luck..David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2012 7:48:00 AM

Winner for sure..Sara