Tim Ryerson Poet Quatrain

Ornery Old Men

Good GOD you're a pain
You crazy old fool!
Stop bending my brain
Oh yeah? Hate you too!

Don't you SAY that!
Call me one of those
I'll make your lip fat
Bust your skinny nose!...

Hey man, what's shakin'?
In the neighborhood
What's that you makin'?
Smells pretty good

Nope not too hungry
Gonna' rain I hear
Nah, wasn't angry
Got any beer?

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Eileen Manassian June 15, 2013 at 10:02 AM Tim! Hi! Loved this...It is just so so cute! You aren't in this category, are ya? Na! You are still young! Age is just a number! Hugs!

Francine Roberts June 10, 2013 at 6:48 AM congrats on your win in the contest Tim, made me smile this morning

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2013 at 11:31 AM Good after noon TIM ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2012 at 3:36 PM a punch of a write, tim.. cheers to you for the fine win!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2012 at 3:20 PM Well written for the contest Tim - congrats on your win ! - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams July 13, 2012 at 2:46 PM Tim, congrats on your win, well done..David

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2012 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in my contest Tim. Thank you so much for your support always. Love, Carol

Deborah Burch July 10, 2012 at 6:57 PM LOL!! Tim, Tim, Tim...lol...:D i'm too tickled to say anything else!! well done! love ya , deb

Keith Bickerstaffe July 5, 2012 at 5:34 PM Being an 'ornery old man' myself I was drawn to your title! This is hysterical... it's like looking in the mirror for me! (well, some of it anyway!!) Well done, Tim!!! Best wishes, Keith

Joann Grisetti July 5, 2012 at 10:53 AM Sounds like my brothers when they get together - there's always a little of bravado who's toughest, etc. then they get the beer.

Nette Onclaud July 5, 2012 at 10:39 AM i like male bonding.. and part of this is beer!.. grreat work,tim; it is so alive!... winning wishes and huggs!

David Williams July 5, 2012 at 8:37 AM Tim, quick spats, I like them..good luck..David

Sara Kendrick July 5, 2012 at 7:48 AM Winner for sure..Sara