Origin

A rock thrown in the pond
makes a splash, vibrations sent 
from its origin
depending on the force
determines how long it lasts
an accurate reflection of what just 
happend
you came in the middle of the 
storm while sailing in the seas
when all hope was gone
you pitched a stone made
of what it felt like to be in love
before impact there was a spectrum of bright lights and sounds
adding what needed added and subtracting what needed subtracting
as the force knocked me off my feet
I arose pulsing and vibrating 
with your energy.
Abruptly, it was gone.
It was nice for the moment to know what it felt like to be in love
Again, searching for the origin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/29/2010 7:20:00 PM
Thanks for responding. As a newbie to soup, I feel a bit disoriented. I like your "Origin", both the Youtube and the written. My YouTube of "Freddie and Fanny" is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6UnHANluOw How do I get it into your contest? Do I post it again with just the link appearing or should I edit the 'Freddie and Fanny' I already have posted and put the link at the bottom and then update my entry into your contest? Whew! Why is life so complicated.
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:13:00 AM
SOUP MAIL my friend.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:24:00 AM
Thankxxx Tavarus for your kind words on my humble entry .. I have some words I want to share with u in your search and journey for LUV... will try to fit them in a Soup Mail... u are a brilliant star and poet on this site.. your work is intricate and deeply touching.. u wirte from a different place bringing light to the darkened corners ... LUV is the greatest emotion a human being can feel ..only topped by the LUV of GOD... so look for your Soup Mail shortly.. they are powerful and awesome. luv
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:56:00 AM
So often love is a fleeting thing, Tavarus. In can vanish in an instant or over years, but we are blessed to know its amazing, uplifting feeling. Enjoyed the insight in your poem very much! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:38:00 PM
The origin is in the universe itself.. the energy master .. which we draw from and put in to.. what is put in ..it received back.. only positive should be your goal in your soul... negatives erase all the positives and they drain the circuits of energy in ones spirit.. the brighter your spirit the brighter your light shines in the Universe to attract like energy ..or energy just like yours ..compatible to your own... deep ..yes.. but it works... enjoyed with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:05:00 AM
I arose pulsing and vibrating with your energy- nice expression. It feels like to be in love
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