Joe Maverick Poet Verse

Oriel Into 2

Enhanced mood enriching Solace
  
Solace renewing mind and being..'

Being, transforming; sense of all.

All encompassing light receiving


  
Receiving to give more in strength

Strength reaching upwards as columns

Columns support shelter above

Above is great Intelligence...'


  
Intelligence awaiting a seeking..'
 
Seeking your soul, solar shows..

Shows form, throws shadows around
 
Around follows all, each solar year..' 


©Joe Maverick 6-6-2015

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Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2015 at 12:41 PM thanks for seeing my recent post, Joe. It looks like I am all caught up on reading your recent poems!! I answered your soupmail!!

Daver Austin July 24, 2015 at 2:41 PM What I said the first time - windows into soul. The getting receptive. "All encompassing light receiving" Love, daver

Wilma Neels July 24, 2015 at 5:30 AM Joe you make this look so easy ;) Absolutely love it.. How are you doing?

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2015 at 6:40 PM You have skills my friend! Great use of the form.

Matthew Anish July 6, 2015 at 9:26 PM I like this poem - it has depth and intelligence. What is Oriel - a constellation? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Afolabi Muideen June 26, 2015 at 6:07 PM What a fabulous. Write, excellent.............A.M.

Sara Kendrick June 17, 2015 at 8:11 AM Creative work..Way to go, Joe..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2015 at 4:06 PM I see you enjoyed the form Nette showed us in one of her challenges. I like where you took this and I see the other one there in the middle of this set. Joe Maverick June 15, 2015 at 5:25 PM The other one was which I entered into Nettes contest, if you read the inspiration note above it Andrea, I am sure it was the 1st one anyway..'

Constance La France June 14, 2015 at 3:27 PM Joe, you have penned many great words and phrases within this write and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone

Scott Thirtyseven June 14, 2015 at 8:58 AM tweets away

Harry Horsman June 14, 2015 at 8:40 AM Love both of these Joe, ever so different, which makes it all the more unique.

Scott Thirtyseven June 13, 2015 at 6:52 AM Ok, no wine, and a greater appreciation. I like how this piece circles back around on itself. I like how the words follow on from themselves. The message makes me yearn for learning. Great work. Why haven't you tweeted the link??? I will quite happily if you approve.

Daver Austin June 12, 2015 at 11:32 AM I get the shadow searching. This one goes inside and needs a bit of imagination to see the light. Be happy in your light, old Joe. Love, daver

Peter Lewis Holmes June 12, 2015 at 3:41 AM Captivating write Joe....Oriel Into 3?....and thanks for the comment...Peter

Connie Marcum Wong June 11, 2015 at 8:57 PM Wow Joe, this deserves to be recognized as POTD! I am putting it into my Fav's. It is just OUTSTANDING writing! Cheers, Connie 7

Afolabi Muideen June 10, 2015 at 3:07 AM This is extremely interesting and enjoyable Bravo I really enjoyed the read and thanks for shared.......A.M.

Scott Thirtyseven June 9, 2015 at 7:14 AM I might have drunk too much wine for this one?

Keith Bickerstaffe June 8, 2015 at 3:54 PM Very well constructed and rendered... I love the phrasing you employ and the imagery it creates. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith