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when the fiery stars hover their spears over the dim forests, and the burning moon makes love to the naked sea, When springs spins the pasture around and the Nightingale stays up all night, When the murmuring river has a few of us whom it whispers in the ear, When no one is around but you and me, ......your ochre lips i have to kiss wet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/14/2011 5:52:00 AM
Your mastery of the "descriptive" aspect of words is so good it almost feels illegal. Great Write...
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Date: 9/2/2009 4:11:00 PM
your hard to believe.
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:15:00 PM
great use of imagery.
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Date: 7/21/2009 1:35:00 PM
The first 4 lines are heaven! Line 8 needs tweaking...perhaps..when the murmuring river whisper sweet nothings in our ears? & make the last 3 lines 2 lines? I've missed your writting on I go to more! Light & Love
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