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Organic Ecstasy

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It had been a day full of miraculous detail. Freezing rain played the ground like a kettle drum. Trees snapped and flowers curtsied before engaging in a pas de deux with blades of grass on the stage of this summer eve. Our erupting blazing star... Sported a set of yellow barn doors sorely in need of a paint job; Closed shut with a heavy metal rusty lock seeping a golden shade; Upstaging the blue sky and creating its own distinct wash to signal the break of day. A curvy curved river flowed naturally through the mountains into a water colored sunset. The moon waited patiently offstage with bedroom eyes anxious to make her entrance. And I, Well - I just stood motionless, Hoping to absorb it all; Hoping to never take this planet for granted; A non opiate I like to call Organic Ecstasy. And not a sign of men’s hands anywhere in sight. 14~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne

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Date: 12/15/2014 6:53:00 AM
I'm speachless. just beautiful :) :)
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Date: 12/15/2014 12:35:00 AM
wowowow, this one sings with imagery. I just love this writing!!! Another fave!!!
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:51:00 PM
wow thats all I can say.....Seren ..into fav's you go
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:05:00 PM
incredible imagery through out Maurice but the one of the moon - wow awesome - such a kaleidoscope of colour in this write - 7 faves for me:-) Hugs Jan x
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