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Organic Ecstasy

It had been a day full of miraculous detail.

Freezing rain played the ground like a kettle drum.

Trees snapped and flowers curtsied 
before engaging in a pas de deux 
with blades of grass on the stage 
of this summer eve.

Our erupting blazing star...

Sported a set of yellow barn doors sorely in need of a paint job;

Closed shut with a heavy metal rusty lock seeping a golden shade;

Upstaging the blue sky and creating its own distinct wash
to signal the break of day. 

A curvy curved river flowed naturally through 
the mountains into a water colored sunset.

The moon waited patiently offstage with bedroom eyes 
anxious to make her entrance.

And I,

Well - I just stood motionless,

Hoping to absorb it all;

Hoping to never take this planet for granted;

A non opiate 

I like to call

Organic Ecstasy. 

And not a sign of men’s hands anywhere in sight.


14~12~2014
Maurice Yvonne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 6:53 AM
I'm speachless. just beautiful :) :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 12:35 AM
wowowow, this one sings with imagery. I just love this writing!!! Another fave!!!
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:51 PM
wow thats all I can say.....Seren ..into fav's you go
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:05 PM
incredible imagery through out Maurice but the one of the moon - wow awesome - such a kaleidoscope of colour in this write - 7 faves for me:-) Hugs Jan x
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