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Ordinary Orange


In life and nature orange is all around us, just ordinary orange, 
orange cats, nothing special, orange leaves we kick out of the way;
marigold flowers and we just walk by, ordinary things in life,
tiger lily's grow on the side of the road, perhaps we think them weeds.
an apricot, honey sunset, do we stop to gaze, or rush away,
just ordinary orange things in our world, a tangerine fish in the sea;
swimming in the filigree coral, a marmalade coloured bird singing,
I used to think of myself as ordinary, ordinary could have been my name.
of no special quality or interest, unexceptional, plain, inferior, 
just an ordinary orange girl, but then suddenly like an orange flower;
blooming under the orange tinted sun, I blossomed, and became,
exceptional and beautiful, and like the orange cat, I do not need to be told.
I just know that I am beautiful inside, my spirit is a marigold glow,
so ordinary orange is quite beautiful, if you bother to stop and behold.

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March 4, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/Ordinary Orange
Copyright Protected, ID 16-764-110-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, United Colours: Orange
sponsor, Silent One

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 14, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats ~
Inman Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Beautiful write, BW, but I've always thought of you as a more zesty tangerine.
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 12:05 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the zesty tangerine...
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
La France Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Sara, thanks for the congrats and the outstanding !
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. You are a star in a midnight sky shining bright and eternal. I did enjoy this Orange write. It is not as ordinary as you would think, a seven from me....Vlad.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Vlad, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and for the nice compliments, you are the best !
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on your win Constance.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Nayda, thanks for visiting with congratulations !
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Constance , a big congratulations, and I look forward to hearing from you in email soon.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and an email is coming, promise !
Beaufort Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Yes, far from ordinary it is and yes far from that are you. Like a beautiful item in the list you are if we happen to stop by to enjoy it. How lucky for us (me) to behold your essence in these words. Sheer magic how you do this so seemingly without effort and so majestically. It is the work of something not ordinary at all--so humble and pure in expression but basic truth.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Duke, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment and compliments, so appreciated !
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:16 AM
BW, beautiful imagery and use of the color orange...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Laura, thanks so much for the nice comment and congrats !
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:08 AM
- B.W., congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM
I love the direction you went with this piece. You my dear are far from Ordinary!
La France Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Richard, thank you so much for the compliment !
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 10:59 PM
wonderfully done. So much nicer to orange than mine is. I really do not like this color but you pointed out all the beautiful things in that color!!
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, so appreciated, only nature can make orange beautiful !
Ashe Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:46 PM
I read and I look into the cat's eyes...and I read and look into the cat's eyes and "she" says "yep, I'm orange, but I'm far from ordinary!!!" You Broken Wings...You!!! :-)
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Walter, thanks for the great comment, there is nothing ordinary about that beautiful cat, although there are a gazillion orange cats in the world !
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:11 PM
This is far from ordinary Constance - delightful vibrant imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:31 PM
Jan, thank you for that lovely comment, and compliment, so appreciated !
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Ahh!! Glad to know that you are beautiful Spirit..I thought that you might be..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
La France Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Sara, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate !
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