Ordinary Morning

Sparrows on the oak
In the light of dawn
Hot tea on my desk
I hum an old song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Like the melody to this one Jim.Rgds Brian
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 3:59 PM
A gentle and refreshing poem, Jim!
Richards Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Simply beautiful...simple and sweet! ~
Goff Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Jim, beautiful poem! contemplative, comfort, confidant...these things I feel from this poem..Jim
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