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Ordered Out of Bed

Café al Bachio, you betcha!
My husband so steamy,
his eyes so dreamy, as
his morning cause
is to order me out of bed,
(ladies and gentlemen,
you know that’s not true,
but let’s pretend)
so we leave the counter
with dollars and sense
poured into paper cups.
Oh sweet macchiato; he loves,
and the creamy latte - I should
not, so over the days cappuccino,
olay! (My darling seldom drinks
coffee, but our sheets stay warm)

A preteen picks up her order
of eight cups. Her younger brother
is warming himself with a game.
She tells him, “Jeffrey, you idiot,
get over here!” He doesn’t budge.
Where are the adults - playing
games of their own? Oh buzz!

Café Al Bachio, you betcha!
Full steam ahead! Perfection!
Ordered out of bed on the high seas.
The Caribbean rocks us awake.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 6:12 PM
what a dreamy vacation!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thank you xx
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 1:38 AM
I used to love coffee, especially when I visited Italy. Delightful, until the doctor ordered only water. Hope you had a lovely vacation.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 4:28 AM
We did! Thank you, dear friend!
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:50 PM
Sire sounds dreamy, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 4:28 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Hind Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Interesting!!! I love cafes. Sounds so enjoyable <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 4:29 AM
It really was! Hugs :)
DiMino Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Delightful! My drug of choice, caffeine. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Joe! A cup of joe for Joe!
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