Order of the Arrow

Three days and topo, 
Drawn circle to stay 
Within; can’t 
Encounter another.

Three days of solitude
Bare provisions, no tent;
Fruit, jerky, one egg,
Three matches.

The rest of food to find
Mid-summer, Sierra,
Plenty if you know,
Nothing if not.

Night one, little sleep 
Chilled, shaking fingers
Touch flame to tinder – 
Welcome whisp.

Eat one half orange
Put egg within
Then orange into coals – 
The first breakfast.

Eve, day two, 
The silence doesn’t speak;
Smells and sounds 
Grow strong and loud.

Night three, a voice
Different language
Primal, musical,
Ecstatic, empowering.

Hike back, meet others
Sit in circle, no talk,
Eat sandwiches
Listen to a drum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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May 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This says a lot in a minimum of words.
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October 15, 2020 at 2:08 PM
love this poem... great use of language to describe native life..
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