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truth has a deadly force when it defends the light of truth and justice 

Where gossip hits a sudden death 
when it enters a wise person's ears
Your words are displeasing to me 
choice has two characters 
one that hates the other's love 
I can taste the bitterness of your soul attacking 
forcing your opinion as having direct value 
over something you know absolutely nothing 
The targeting of the innocent 
is the acts of a bully cornered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/10/2019 9:02:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))A very powerful poem, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Sadly, we're living in a very corrupted, dangerous, evil world, times, with lots of hate too!God is Love n' Light!Well expressed !Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Enjoyed!We need to pray alot for all ppl, Liam!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Remember the Lord is always right there with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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