Order

Systems predict, prepare. There's safety in numbers. No surprises in the new world... Order

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/18/2015 3:34:00 PM

excellent write Lycia, thanks for shared i just heard of the new world today..............A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 3:57:00 PM

It sounds like you support the new world order? I know some people are very much against it!!

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/15/2015 8:34:00 PM

No way! I couldn't care less about that paranoid thinkspeak, I just like to include a trick ending if I can and that concept just provided the play on words. Eileen got it right, this poem is actually about keeping the chaos at bay through organization, which I DO support. I just thought I'd flip it to the totalitarian side

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2015 12:16:00 AM

Without order, chaos would prevail. I'm left to wonder about that reference to the new world, Lycia. Intriguing poem. :)

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/15/2015 8:37:00 PM

PS. Please see commentary above - I am NOT about the new world order, I'll just sell out for the sake of poetic mobility

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/15/2015 12:23:00 AM

Good one! ;)

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/15/2015 12:20:00 AM

Ah, but in the new world, nothing is left to wonder... heh heh