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Orchestral Sighs


On our bed she lies
Half naked to bare, sound asleep
Tanned curves allure me
Eyes closed, visions of last night
Sheets gripped tight, orchestral sighs




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Carol Eastman

October 31, 2014 at 9:34 AM

Great imagery and flow... Really accents your thoughts. Shows every thing off to it's best advantage. Well done!

James Fraser

October 31, 2014 at 4:24 PM

Thank you kindly Carol, your comments are always appreciated, James :)

Liam Mcdaid

October 24, 2014 at 1:39 PM

really love how you drew this excellent pen dear friend

James Fraser

October 24, 2014 at 3:22 PM

Thank you kindly Liam, very much appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 24, 2014 at 1:31 AM

orchestral sighs what a phrase..:) it connotes various images but with this one.... mmmn and it's sensuous.. :)..... olive eloisa.. wink ;)

James Fraser

October 24, 2014 at 12:39 PM

Mixing words that one may not think apt, sometimes shows adapt. It's the daring of the writer for he/she knows what they are thinking. It's up to the reader to delve into their thinking depths to decipher what the writer is thinking. Sometimes I'm read, then again, sometimes I'm unsaid - James.......