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Orchard of Perspectives Premiere Contest Winner

Black boxes atop a vintage shelf adorned with dust of opinions groan. Oh they are overweight with burdens quivering to shed a few genuine thoughts but they burn in the fire of red dragon that engulfs snow-clad valleys somewhere or those driven by processed thoughts cocooned in silver foils of inclination Insane frenzy still remains for verdicts declared by those deemed righteous yet this orchard boasts of supremacy. I've bubbled a thousand crimson ideas nascent and pious they seemed to me. Alas! we all have been presumptuous every human is conditioned thus to be. A folklore lost in the Indian ocean fills my blue cup to the brim 'succumb to the obvious or breathe'. My bougainvillea seeds sprout in cacophony, I let them dance in multiverse of drops my eyes witness dimensions in perspectives stagnant rivers now rush to travel as far as my mind opens rusty gates displaced neutrons explode in a Big Bang here's to another beginning of existence. My mind sprays fragrance of blue roses extinguishing raging flames of supernova. This trench needs to be extended beyond seven seas and continents of Rome, let bees and butterflies fly in unbiased harmony to suck nectar and produce infant honey. I've planted my primrose of valor and hope in the orchard of perspectives at last, wiped dust of assumptions from black box wrapped in banana leaves under oak tree. I'm not free of my opinions but let them be no longer do I succumb to frenzied wars. I've got a song for my cuckoo to orchestrate my tunes absorb opinionated fumes in universe and crush them till they nourish aroma of light that builds an abode for explorers that roam in a luminescent entropy of ideas that flutter around judgement but not pulled down by it pumping superimposed energy to newborn pearls that breathe free with all perspectives. June 25, 2020 Opinion Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann ~Premiere Contest Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/6/2020 1:32:00 PM
Back to offer my congratulations for your win with this deep and amazing poem, my friend! God bless you ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 1:34:00 AM
Thank you for your second visit and kind appreciation my friend. Blessings :)
Date: 7/1/2020 12:08:00 AM
A wow and congratulations on this poem and your win. xoxo You are an amazing poetess Aditi
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 12:17:00 AM
Glad you love my words Jeanne! Thanks for your visit and kind words. Much love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 1:42:00 PM
Always TOPPER. Big Congrats. Too tough. Beyond my perception. Love .
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:42:00 PM
Thanks you for your kind appreciation and love Ma'am! Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 1:04:00 PM
This is excellent. A well deserved top spot for the contest. Great work
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation Funom! Blessings :)
Date: 6/29/2020 12:04:00 PM
This is a fantastic well-written rendering, Aditi, my compliments for your worthy 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thanks for your kind visit and gracious appreciation William! God bless you :)
Date: 6/29/2020 10:45:00 AM
"displaced neutrons explode in a Big Bang", "Extinguishing raging flames of supernova." I think you know why I loved these lines, Aditi. You have such a unique voice, and these thoughts of yours that traverse the galaxy of your mind are given such excellent expression. I'm so glad you have "planted my primrose of valor and hope in the orchard of perspectives at last", you have certainly deserved the #1 spot in the Opinions contest. Brilliantly done, my good friend ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:40:00 PM
I know and I am glad you shower such gracious appreciation and kindness on my words dear friend! Your interpretation of my thoughts always brightens my day. Thank you for being such a generous source of encouragement. God bless you :)
Date: 6/29/2020 10:20:00 AM
A pleasure to walk the winding path through your robust garden of a poem! Congratulations on your top win Aditi! Hugs ~xomo
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:38:00 PM
Glad you love my words Maureen! Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings and lots of love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 10:06:00 AM
A wonderful write Aditi, I marvel at your use of the vocabulary, such grace and fluidity in your thoughts, I could keep reading this but alas it ended. I will fave this one to savor over and over. Congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:37:00 PM
I am really glad you love my words John! Thanks for the honor of your appreciation and the fave. Blessings :)
Date: 6/29/2020 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations to you. Your style is unique and very different. It captures the reader in your word flow. Enjoyable.
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:36:00 PM
I am glad you love my words Janis! Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings and much love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 8:05:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! I'm delighted with your opinions excellently presented in your awesome poetic exposition. God bless you.
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:35:00 PM
Glad you love my words Beata! Thanks for your visit and kind words. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 7:29:00 AM
Wow you have blown me away with your theme for the opinion poem contest no wonder it got a trophy win, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:35:00 PM
I am so glad you love my words Jan! Thanks for your gracious appreciation. Blessings and much love :)
Date: 6/29/2020 7:14:00 AM
A clear demonstration of mastery of language and imagery. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 6/30/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation and wishes Greg! Blessings :)
Date: 6/28/2020 6:22:00 AM
This poem of yours is simply exceptional and the best I've read for the "opinion" contest, including mine. Definitely a high-placer! Congratulations in advance, Aditi:-)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 9:30:00 AM
You praise my muse with wishes that I am humbled to receive. Thank you for such kind words Edward! God bless you :)
Date: 6/27/2020 3:10:00 AM
Superbly executed Aditi...you are a great word stacker lol...great entry my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/28/2020 9:28:00 AM
I am always honored when you appreciate my words WW! Thank you for being a source of strength. God bless you :)
Date: 6/26/2020 1:20:00 PM
Somehow, I think that you've hit on something here, Adita! Flower-power certainly beats brainpower, especially these days... Perhaps our brains will now evolve smaller and smaller as we use them less and less. Whereas flowers will grow incredible brains, invisible to the naked eye... Just musing. Thanks, Gershon
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/27/2020 1:30:00 AM
I am really thankful that you dived deep into my words and brought forward such an interesting perspective Gershon! Your theory is amazing to ponder upon, our brains evolving smaller with less usage! Thanks for such a unique take on my muse. God bless you :)
Date: 6/25/2020 12:55:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem and goodluck in your contest
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/25/2020 1:40:00 PM
Glad you love my words Funom. Thank you for your visit and your kind appreciation. God bless you :)

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