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Orchard of Dragonflies

The sky scatters pixie dust~
across orchards of dragonflies;
while in sunflowers, the stars do trust,
tracing tales through kohl-lit eyes. 
A fairy cloaked in soft florals~
fragranced moon-mists and rhinestone rust.
But within veins of golden corals,
she weaves hope with saffron crust.  

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Paige Hind Date: 12/14/2024 2:46:00 PM Love this - "saffron crust" and "golden corals" so beautiful an ending Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/13/2024 5:08:00 AM Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/13/2024 4:15:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Ink :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/12/2024 9:21:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write again. Have a wonderful day writing away.............. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/12/2024 2:13:00 AM You weave a poem out of thin air. So many astounding lines that thrill the soul of poetry. Loved orchards of dragonflies; tracing tales, fragranced moon-mists and rhinestone rust. All so beautiful. Victor Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 12/11/2024 9:18:00 PM Dear Empress, you prove that even a nursery rhyme can be turned into an exquisite piece of poetry. The very title is capturing. Love the image of 'the fairy cloaked in soft florals' and 'weaving hope with saffron crust'! Beautiful diction. All the best sweet poetess! Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 12/10/2024 2:31:00 PM Beautiful use of language with imagery. Delightful read! Thank you. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 8:14:00 AM Thank you so very much always dear joe appreciate your kindness and support

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 12/10/2024 11:58:00 AM Sweet & wonderful short poem! Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 8:12:00 AM Thank you dear abdullah so kind of you to say soo grateful

John Read Date: 12/10/2024 11:41:00 AM Your poem floats along beautifully, wish you well in the contest Dear Ink. xx Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 8:12:00 AM Ah thank you dear john so very much. So kind of you to say so, I appreciate your support truly

Robert James Liguori Date: 12/10/2024 9:19:00 AM Oh the beauty of nature! I loved reading your poem. So natural. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 8:08:00 AM Thank you so glad you think this is natural, appreciate your support always

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/10/2024 8:55:00 AM What a creative/fun write. Love This... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day................ Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 8:01:00 AM Thank you dear Paula, i need to read yours . Appreciate always your support

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/10/2024 6:30:00 AM IE, lovely images and what you've done really enhances the spirit of dragonflies. They are enchanting to watch and follow, and your images and words add to how we can think of them. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 7:55:00 AM Thank you so much dear duke for your kind feedback. Truly grateful always

Tom Woody Date: 12/10/2024 6:02:00 AM I haven't seen the contest rules but I'm partial to anything with dragonflies since Mia loves them. Sweet rhymes Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 12/11/2024 9:07:00 AM Yes Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 7:54:00 AM Is mia your wife? Awwn she loves dragonflies? Im actually scared of dragonflies lol. Thank you so much for your kind support, grateful always

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/10/2024 5:18:00 AM My gosh, your words never cease to enchannnt me, dear fairy goddess! And wow, you really brought the fairyland to life here with this one, weaving an utterly gorgeous and magical atmosphere, and I can't help but swoon over the imagery which you've painted so cosmically ahhhh ~ "The sky scatters pixie dust", "while in sunflowers, the stars do trust", "But within veins of golden corals, she weaves hope with saffron crust" You yourself are a fairy cloaked in soft florals, weaving hope for us all! Honestly, it feels as if this poem is pulsating stardust in my arteries, simply so artistic and beyond breathtaking!! One of my most favourite micros from you.. Best wishes for the contest, keep smiling, writing and inspiring! Love and hugssss :) A faveeee. Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 7:53:00 AM Awwn you are truly the best thank you for being such a supportive soul, your feedback always is so soul warming to read. And so sincere and you always understand. Grateful truly

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/10/2024 3:48:00 AM You captured the scene well in your verse IE. Your imagination skills on fine display with this one. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 7:51:00 AM Thank you so very much dear tom so kind of you to say. I am truly grateful for your support

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/10/2024 3:43:00 AM - A wonderful poem, Ink :) - hugs Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/11/2024 7:50:00 AM Thank you so much for your kind feedback grateful always

The Aura Rhymes Date: 12/10/2024 3:40:00 AM It was so easy to read this poem . Loved it . Thank you for blessing my eyes Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 12/10/2024 6:01:00 AM Buwahahaha. Next one is twenty stanzas, just for you! Ink Empress Date: 12/10/2024 3:41:00 AM Cus of the length? Hahahah

Lioness Onpaper Date: 12/10/2024 3:30:00 AM The sky scatters pixie dust across orchards of dragonflies… oooo love a good swarm of dragonflies papi!!! tracing tales through kohl-lit eyes. Ooo somethng abt that sounds sexaaaaay! fragranced moon-mists and rhinestone rust. Love that line papi!!! But within veins of golden corals, she weaves hope with saffron crust. Mmmmm absolutely stunning papi!!! Love the how the rhymes goes sooo perfectly with each other aeee Login to Reply Ink Empress Date: 12/10/2024 3:40:00 AM Its a quickie before gym lolol u are fast! Thank u for the comment papi! U da best papi ever