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Orchard Fantasy Of the naked earth and sky, Ripened nature's in our eyes. Grown are we in pure bred soil, Adding fertilizer and more toil. Naturally you see we're free. In us there are no chemicals, Clinging to life’s miracle. Frost and flood may be our fear, Rain from acid atmosphere. Underneath the ground we're roots. In due time we show our shoots. Tree lined rows in paths we run, Silly fruits, just having fun. 8/15/16 ORCHARD FANTASY - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 8/17/2016 10:49:00 AM
wow this is great in description of organic fruits as well as in the visual of the orchard, well done and good luck! :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/17/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes and stopping by.
Date: 8/16/2016 3:58:00 PM
this is a cute entry, Janis. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:49:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes Andrea.

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