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Orbital Seduction

She opened her eyes petal by petal Peeling away the glory of the sun And through the tall grass of lashes A sprig of fevered desires run Open hearted to the dark pupil's pool To slake my thirst, and lave dreams. A new species of flower bloom here Dark purple hibiscus on a face most fair Light glistens in the liquid streams Of seductive melodies playing softly Against an old poet's hard agony. What eyes are these that so commend Virile virtue to a voluptuous end?

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Date: 4/18/2009 10:36:00 AM
Applause ! Applause ! Applause ! ..... Great title ! "Dark purple hibiscus on a face most fair Light glistens in the liquid streams Of seductive melodies playing softly Against an old poet's hard agony." .... Genius stuff !
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Date: 4/15/2009 2:49:00 PM
a new species of flower bloom here-i find this in all of you here on poetry soup,you are all my blooming flowers.seductive melodies -against an old's poet hard agony-you re so young at heart,your poetry is a gem-charma
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