Orange Whistle

Pour some haemoglobin in a radiant yolk
Angelina Jolie will come out of the bowl
Both combine to dance in orange soul
Orange fire comes out ridding smoke

I hold the orange and breathe in profound life
Doubts are quelled by your audible heartbeats
  Struggle blossoms happily in the streets
  Orange smiles in both peace and strife

With orange in thought we may beat the drum
Dance like waves and smile like flowing stream
  Have our nights full of orange dreams
 Join our hands and say we shall overcome

Give me your oranges to my craving door
  I will give you all my orange tulips
 Together let us play the orange music
To get into the still centre of orange core
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March 5, 2016
United Colors: Orange, Poetry Contest
Theme: Optimistic Orange
16 Lines in Rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/14/2016 11:42:00 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 11:48:00 PM
Always thanks with orange wishes.....
Date: 3/7/2016 10:20:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go with the orange theme..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Sara. By the way, what does N/A indicate and on what criteria a contest poem is marked so ? Can you please enlighten?
Date: 3/7/2016 6:04:00 AM
Hi Probir. Congrats for your WIN with this amazing verse!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Teddy...
Date: 3/6/2016 7:05:00 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thank you.....
Date: 3/6/2016 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Probir
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:36:00 PM
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:02:00 AM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:13:00 AM
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:13:00 AM
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:12:00 AM
- Probir, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:50:00 AM
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