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Orange Were the Dahlias

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So tangerine apricot carrot colored and marmalade, Blooms graced the garden of warm sunshine and shade. Orange were rich dahlias where hummingbirds hummed, With a rare beauty which left the daylight stunned! Over with the blues, skies of chiffon clouds danced, All of a summer, while huge marigold sun entranced! Orange were the butterflies, searching for delights, Whereas flame robins flounced and sang day and night!

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Date: 3/2/2021 8:09:00 AM
I love your nature poems Evelyn. They're always cheerful! :) Linda
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Date: 2/25/2021 7:36:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, The lovely shades or orange just pops in your well written write. You created such a gorgeous scene. Well done:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/26/2021 8:43:00 AM
I love color, and adding colorful scenes to my poetry. Thank you for your appreciation. :)
Date: 2/25/2021 9:17:00 AM
Hi, Evelyn! I’ve seen yellow gardens, & red/pinks & varied, but never saw or imagined such a varied fire of orange species. My breath would be stolen, bending under trees to meet such a sight! You are turning into VanGogh of words!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/25/2021 1:30:00 PM
Hi Sally! I appreciate reading such joyful, heart lifting sentiments. Thank you for taking the time to share such positive thoughts and wonderful compliments. :)
Date: 2/24/2021 10:46:00 PM
Nice poem. So many beautiful shades of orange. Great contrast against the blue sky.
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Date: 2/25/2021 6:35:00 AM
Your kind words are a lovely start to my morning. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/23/2021 10:28:00 PM
I would certainly be stunned hearing the humming of of the hummingbirds. ~~
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Date: 2/24/2021 8:58:00 AM
We are in the midst of a big melt-the snow is going fast! So it won't be too long! :)
Date: 2/23/2021 9:26:00 PM
love this cos orange has always been the explosion in my eye and I love everything orange you've written :)
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Date: 2/24/2021 9:00:00 AM
That's so nice to know. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 2/23/2021 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful descriptiveness and rhyming here. I remember one year my late parents had big red dahlias in their garden.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/23/2021 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so much. Dahlias are beautiful flowers, and a thing of beauty is a joy forever. :)

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