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Orange Were the Dahlias

So tangerine apricot carrot colored and marmalade,
Blooms graced the garden of warm sunshine and shade.
Orange were rich dahlias where hummingbirds hummed,
With a rare beauty which left the daylight stunned!

Over with the blues, skies of chiffon clouds danced,
All of a summer, while huge marigold sun entranced!
Orange were the butterflies, searching for delights, 
Whereas flame robins flounced and sang day and night!
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Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:09 AM
I love your nature poems Evelyn. They're always cheerful! :) Linda
Y. Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 7:36 PM
WoW! Evelyn, The lovely shades or orange just pops in your well written write. You created such a gorgeous scene. Well done:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 8:43 AM
I love color, and adding colorful scenes to my poetry. Thank you for your appreciation. :)
Eslinger Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Hi, Evelyn! I’ve seen yellow gardens, & red/pinks & varied, but never saw or imagined such a varied fire of orange species. My breath would be stolen, bending under trees to meet such a sight! You are turning into VanGogh of words!
Buehler Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Hi Sally! I appreciate reading such joyful, heart lifting sentiments. Thank you for taking the time to share such positive thoughts and wonderful compliments. :)
Ligon Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 10:46 PM
Nice poem. So many beautiful shades of orange. Great contrast against the blue sky.
Buehler Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Your kind words are a lovely start to my morning. Thank you so much. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 10:28 PM
I would certainly be stunned hearing the humming of of the hummingbirds. ~~
Buehler Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:58 AM
We are in the midst of a big melt-the snow is going fast! So it won't be too long! :)
Woodrow Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 9:26 PM
love this cos orange has always been the explosion in my eye and I love everything orange you've written :)
Buehler Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:00 AM
That's so nice to know. Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful descriptiveness and rhyming here. I remember one year my late parents had big red dahlias in their garden.
Buehler Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Thank you so much. Dahlias are beautiful flowers, and a thing of beauty is a joy forever. :)
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